雅思优秀作文

一、雅思满分,真有雅思满分作文吗

有的。

雅思满分作文It is certainly true that today traffic in cities throughout the world has become a major problem. This is obvious from the number of vehicles on our roads and the amount of pollution they cause. Probably the traffic problem is due to individuals travelling for work, study or shopping purposes, and this is evident in the rush hours we experience every morning and evening. It is also true that, these days, such daily commuting is not always necessary because people can do these things from home. We can see this in the options Information Technology gives us today. For instance, on-line work, distance learning and shopping facilities are all available via the Internet. However, even if everyone had access to the technology and the opportunity to work from home, it is unrealistic to think that everyone would want to. Even though the technology for working, studying or shopping on-line makes this option a possibility, nevertheless it would mean people had less freedom of choice and less social contact in their lives. This would have a large impact on society as a whole. So, in conclusion, I think that while this practice could reduce the traffic problems in our cities, it is most unlikely to be an acceptable solution. In terms of other solutions, perhaps we need to think more carefully about facilitating public transport and limiting private cars in our city centres. The development of public transport that is not road-based, such as sky trains or subways, would probably be a more acceptable alternative measure to reduce jams on our roads. --------------------------------------------------------------------------- 首位雅思作文满分的学生感言西安市庆安中学高中二年级的陈晨，一个17岁的小女孩，喜欢书法、爱练太极、打乒乓球，像别的女孩子一样爱漂亮。但不同的是，05年2月，国际英语雅思考试（IELTS）的考场上，这个来自西安市庆安中学高中二年级的女孩，仅用了40分钟，以一篇漂亮的作文得到了雅思历次考试有史以来全国首个作文满分近日获得新东方教育科技集团首次颁发的高分特等奖。

同时，她的听说读写综合成绩为7.5分。看到这个成绩，陈晨自己也感到非常意外。

从开始上雅思辅导，到参加考试，她一共才用了一个多月的准备时间。而这一个多月的背后则是长达数年的不断坚持。

兴趣就是最好的老师说起自己当初学英语，陈晨笑言，这是一个美丽的意外。正经开始学英语应该是从初中开始。

但初一的时候，她并不喜欢英语。因为当时她的英语口语特别不好，加上这种学习是和考试挂钩的，功课的压力，让她很难对这门难学的功课产生好感。

但到了初二，这种局面就完全转变了。初二的时候，陈晨班里来了一位外教。

他的课堂内容几乎是全英语教学。但陈晨非但没有发怵，反而通过这位外教老师活泼轻松的课堂教学慢慢喜欢上了这门不久前还毫不“感冒”的课程。

直到现在想起来，陈晨还一直感激这位引领她踏上英语学习之路的老师。

二、雅思大作文范文

参加过雅思考试的同学都深有体会，跟许多烤鸭们一样视雅思作文为雅思考试中的难中之难。

有此感的原因是，即使有观点，看得懂题目，却找不到合适的句子来表达，也无法写出高分的文章。所以雅思培训查看更多雅思培训的内容>>查看雅思培训课程>>申请雅思培训试听课程>>的专家们为各位雅思考生们总结了大作文的必备句式，让你轻松搞定雅思写作。

以下是雅思考试短文写作中使用率最高、覆盖面最广的基本句式，每组句式的功能相同或相似，考生可根据自己的情况选择其中的1-2个，做到能够熟练正确地仿写或套用。在这里雅思辅导老师需要提醒考生们，盲目的套用句式是不可取的，必须首先做到对这些句式的理解和熟悉，经过大量的练习，才能轻松自如地应用在自己的作文中。

一、表示原因 1、There are three reasons for this。 2、The reasons for this are as follows。

3、The reason for this is obvious。 4、The reason for this is not far to seek。

5、The reason for this is that。

。 6、We have good reason to believe that。

。

例如： There are three reasons for the changes that have taken place in our life。 Firstly, people's living standard has been greatly improved。

Secondly, most people are well paid, and they can afford what they need or like。 Last but not least, more and more people prefer to enjoy modern life。

注：如考生写第一个句子没有把握，可将其改写成两个句子。如：Great changes have taken place in our life。

There are three reasons for this。这样写可以避免套用中的表达失误。

二、表示好处 1、It has the following advantages。 2、It does us a lot of good。

3、It benefits us quite a lot。 4、It is beneficial to us。

5、It is of great benefit to us。例如： Books are like friends。

They can help us know the world better, and they can open our minds and widen our horizons。 Therefore, reading extensively is of great benefit to us。

三、表示坏处 1、It has more disadvantages than advantages。 2、It does us much harm。

3、It is harmful to us。例如： However, everything divides into two。

Television can also be harmful to us。 It can do harm to our health and make us lazy if we spend too much time watching television。

四、表示重要、必要、困难、方便、可能 1、It is important(necessary, difficult, convenient, possible、for sb。 to do sth。

2、We think it necessary to do sth。 3、It plays an important role in our life。

例如： Computers are now being used everywhere, whether in the government, in schools or in business。 Soon, computers will be found in every home, too。

We have good reason to say that computers are playing an increasingly important role in our life and we have stepped into the Computer Age。五、表示措施 1、We should take some effective measures。

2、We should try our best to overcome (conquer、the difficulties。 3、We should do our utmost in doing sth。

4、We should solve the problems that we are confronted(faced、with。例如： The housing problem that we are confronted with is becoming more and more serious。

Therefore, we must take some effective measures to solve it。六、表示变化 1、Some changes have taken place in the past five years。

2、A great change will certainly be produced in the world's communications。 3、The computer has brought about many changes in education。

例如： Some changes have taken place in people's diet in the past five years。 The major reasons for these changes are not far to seek。

Nowadays, more and more people are switching from grain to meat for protein, and from fruit and vegetable to milk for vitamins。七、表示事实、现状 1、We cannot ignore the fact that。

2、No one can deny the fact that。

。 3、There is no denying the fact that。

。

4、This is a phenomenon that many people are interested in。 5、However, that's not the case。

例如： We cannot ignore the fact that industrialization brings with it the problems of pollution。 To solve these problems, we can start by educating the public about the hazards of pollution。

The government on its part should also design stricter laws to promote a cleaner environment。八、表示比较 1、Compared with A, B。

2、I prefer to read rather than watch TV。 3、There is a striking contrast between them。

例如： Compared with cars, bicycles have several advantages besides being affordable。 Firstly, they do not consume natural resources of petroleum。

Secondly, they do not cause the pollution problem。 Last but not least, they contribute to people's health by giving them due physical exercise。

九、表示数量 1、It has increased (decreased、from。

。to。

2、The population in this city has now increased (decreased、to 800,000。 3、The 。

三、求一篇雅思满分作文要求如下：题目里要有表格,且表格中的数据要有

范文：

The table compares the opinions of male and female club members about the services provided by a city sports club.

We can see from the responses that the male members are generally happy or satisfied with the range of activities at the club, with only 5% dissatisfied. In contrast, however, only about two-thirds of female members were positive about the activity range and almost a third were dissatisfied. The genders were more in agreement about the club facilities. only 14% of women and 10% of men were unhappy with these, and the majority (64 and 63% respectively) were very positive. Finally, the female respondents were much happier with the club opening hours than their male counterparts. Almost three-quarters of them were very satisfied with these and only 3% were unhappy, whereas nearly 40% of the men expressed their dissatisfaction.

Overall, the table indicates that female members are most unhappy with the range of activities, while male members feel that opening hours are the least satisfactory aspect of the club.

四、真有雅思满分作文吗

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显然写作不是雅思最难的单项，应该排在口语之后。这也是中国国情决定的。中国考生重精听精读，轻写作口语，这是显而易见的。

其实听说读写中只有写作是非native speaker可以超过local的一项，且是唯一的一项。这一点慎小嶷老师早已提过，这里我就不再多说。

雅思写作评分标准如下：

TR(TaskResponse任务完成情况)

这是评分标准中的第一项，具体体现在是否满足AIE上。A指Argument，即要有辩论；I指Idea，即论点；E指Evidence，即论据。

CC(Coherence&Cohension连贯和衔接)

连贯和衔接分为意连和形连两方面。所谓意连，指一个段落必须围绕一个主题句展开，前后在语意上达到统一和完整。体现在具体的雅思写作过程中时，我们要学会判断哪些观点和例证相符合。对于形连，它的主要表现形式是段落之间和段落内部的连接词。在写作过程中，我们要恰当使用表示承接和转折的连接词（如To Begin With, In Addition, However等）以及句子之间的指示词（This,It等）。

LR(LexicalResources词汇资源)

这一点虽然各种英语作文考试中都会涉及到，但雅思教会我们并不是尽可能使用大词，而是使用恰当的词表达确切的涵义。而且文章内部的语体、风格也要一致。这一过程中我们不但要掌握常用词的同义词，还要辨析其不同的适用语境，同时也要学会用自己的话进行转述。

比如对于题目要求的陈述，传统上学生习惯于将原题抄写一遍，对付汉语作文也不例外，但雅思规定抄原题不算字数。

GR&A(GrammaticalRange&Accuracy语法范围和精确度)

这又有别于传统的为了使用复杂句子而去使用的写作思路。因为除了要会用，还要用得准确和恰当。我们在准备雅思的过程中，不仅要学会如何造句，还要学会每一种句子所适合的语境、语篇。

当然，还有很多细枝末节的东西我这里就不写了。剑桥雅思系列里面有详细的解释。

你所谓的“中国首篇雅思作文”实际上已经没有参考价值了。毕竟今日雅思考试的难度不是N年前可以相比的。而且现在仅仅语法错误一项就可以让你的写作分数惨不忍睹。因为在评分标准中的第四条明确提到了“不仅要学会如何造句，还要学会每一种句子所适合的语境、语篇”。

考官的作文通常是剑桥雅思真题系列后面的范文，可以说是一个满分或者是接近满分的标准。而且考官都是接受过统一培训的，但是个人风格又不同，所以你说的“衡量其他作文”这种说法是不存在的。因为他们必须按照上述四点评分标准来对考生的作文进行评分。

雅思写作拿9分难度相当高这点我承认。但是就算听力和阅读，能拿9分的人也是需要相当高的人品值才能做到。只能说，对于大多数英语学习者来说，雅思单项在8分以上都是可遇不可求的事。但是你要是说最难的单项，必然还是口语了。

五、雅思大作文范文

楼主，你好，我这里有一篇雅思大作文范文，相信对你有用。

雅思作文高分范文：职业专家比明星对社会的贡献大，因此要多收入，同意吗？本文是一篇8分的雅思作文高分范文，文章中有许多的高分句型以及运用的恰到好处的高分词组、词汇，文章的题目是：职业专家比明星对社会的贡献大，因此要多收入，同意吗？现将译文及范文分享给大家，希望对备考雅思的朋友能够有所帮助。中文标题：职业专家比明星对社会的贡献大，因此要多收入，同意吗？译文如下：在当代社会，似乎职业工作这在提高生产力，并给其他人提供直接的服务，而在体育和娱乐方面的名人没有做出此等贡献。

因此，有人认为职业工作者应该比明星得到更多的报酬。然而，我不同意他们的意见，原因如下。

职业工作者个人对社会的贡献不像名人那么多。任何一个职业工作者不像体育或是娱乐名人那样能够在专业领域给大众带来快乐。

并且，同样地，单个职业雇员不能够给国家带来荣耀，也不能提升人们的名族归属感。否则，他们能够做到的话，报酬就不会少。

职业工作者（如医生、护士和老师等）的能够使可以被训练和复制的，而明人的天赋是不可以的。一个普通人能够通过受教育和训练去做那些专业的工作，但是，没有那么的人通过受教育和训练能够打篮球打得像姚明一样好，也没有那么多人跳舞能够跳舞跳得想杰克逊那也好。

此外，缺少的一个职业专家能被另一人所代替，而缺少一位名人可能会导致某一领域发展的限制。不可否认，由于大量的人们在专业领域工作并且直接服务于大众，他们看起来，至少表面上是与公众的生活水平的提升有着更加亲密的联系。

然而，在这个信息时代，当人们更多地关注与精神生活并且能比较单间的获取必要信息时，职业工作者所创造的价值就没有名人所创造的价值高。总之，我不同意职业工作者应该比体育和娱乐名人的工资高的观点。

只有当一个人的价值通过其对社会的全面贡献来衡量的时候，社会每个领域才能得到全面的发展。本文源自雅思救星。

英文标题：Professional workers like doctors, nurses and teachers make a greater contribution to society and so should be paid more than sports and entertainment personalities. To what extent do you agree or disagree？范文如下： It seems that, in this society, professional workers are improving the productivity and providing direct service to others, while celebrities in sports and entertainment are not making such contributions. Therefore, some people claim a higher pay for the former over the latter. However, I would show my disagreement to their statement for the following reasons. Professional workers do not contribute so much to society as celebrities in person. Any single worker in the professional field is not able to bring the happiness to such a large population as a famous person in sports or entertainment does. Also, an individual professional employee cannot similarly bring glories to the country and enhance people's sense of belongings to the nation. Otherwise, if they can, their payment will not be less. Unlike the talents in celebrities that are invaluable, the abilities of professional workers, such as doctors, nurses and teachers can be trained and copied. An ordinary person can be educated or trained to be engaged in those professional jobs, but not so many can be taught to play basketball so well as Yaomin and dance so gracefully as Jackson. Besides, the lack of a professional worker can be soon replaced by another one, while the loss of a celebrity may result in the limit of development in a certain field. Admittedly, due to the large population of people working in professional fields and the direct service people receive from them, they may seem, at least superficially, be more closely related to the improvement of the life level of the public. However, in this information age when people are attaching more importance to their spiritual life and easier in obtaining information needed, the value produced by professional workers is not so high as that brought by the celebrities. To sum up, I do not agree with the idea for professional workers to earn a higher salary than the sports and entertainment personalities. only when a man's value is measured by his overall contribution to society, can every field in the world be developed to its full.。