雅思作文
一、【【雅思作文高手进】帮我看看这篇作文,估下能得几分我是第一次
既然你说不用客气指出你的文章错处,那麽很对不起,我认为的确有很多错处,现在替你更正一下罢.Today,environmental pollution has been increasingly (seriously 改为 serious).Discuss the reasons why environment is polluted and (give 改为 suggest) some solutions (to 改为 for) it.In the past,there are nearly no pollution in the world,however,with the development of economy,the environment is (加 now) confronted (a 改为 by this) grave issue.First of all,the most significant reason that results in the environmental pollution is industry,Many factories (discharge 改为 are discharging) the effluent and poisonous air (加 and waste) into the river and sky.It causes the death of a lot of aquatic organism and the pollution of the atmosphere.And (in the city,the vehicles become more and more 这句要重新整理为:there are more and more vehicles in the city),at the same time,the exhaust that the vehicles (discharged 改为 discharging) are becoming more and more as well,it aggravate(加 s) the air pollution and make(加 s) the air turbid.In the farm(加 s),farmers use chemical pesticide and fertilizer so that they can get a high yield (in harvest seasons 改为 for their crops).(It 改为 they) make the (fertile soil change infertile 改为 soil more fertile).In my opinion,countries on this planet must join forces to combat environmental problems.The governments should (prevent the quantity of 改为 outlaw 或 punish those) factories which (does 改为 do) not have (percolation 是 precaution) measures,and elevate the public awareness of (environment 是 environmental) production.The farmer(s) should reduce the usage of chemical product(s),( do not mak改为 it would not make) the soil (去掉more) infertile .All in all,the environment cannot be more adverse.On the contrary,if people do not take care of this matter,(in the end 要放在后面),(去掉the) human beings will perish (in the end 或用 eventually).但本人却没有评分的能力,只知原文分数或许不会太高,请原谅我过於坦率.更改后的版本虽然仍非完美,但应可合格,隐拿6分以上.很高兴能够帮到你,祝你考试成功!。
二、雅思作文时间问题求问雅思作文时间怎么练啊,总是超时啊,大作文
总共60分钟的考试小作文应该15-20分钟,大作文40-45分钟,而不是你所讲的50分钟虽然说小作文占的分数比大作文少,也不可以忽略了小作文的主要地位其实小作文都比较简单,来来会会考的都是表格阿,曲线图阿之类的,除非你不好运遇到流程图,否则,就不太需要构思,因为图表都有固定的结构,只是主语有变化而已.所以在平常的话就要加强对每一钟图表的结构的练习.例如,重点练习每种图表题一般都有什么样的句型.大作文才需要构思,但是建议用1-2分钟左右就要审好题定好结构,这样写的时候才写得快.提高速度的方法和小作文一样熟悉每个题型的结构,例如ADVANTAGES AND DISADVANTAGES的题目,有首段,ADVANTAGES段,DISADVANTAGES段,结尾段.建议你多看看雅思作文方面的辅导书,然后在网上找雅思真题限时练习.一开始写的慢就限1小时写完大作文,慢慢再缩短时间,到55分钟,50分钟.坚持下去就可以解决考试时的时间问题了.加油!参考资料:福州新航道fz.xhd.cn加油。
三、有关雅思作文问题谁有作文的模版呀,要自己总结的,还有,句型多
作文考了5分的话.就现在把8分万能作文放起来吧.如果你雅思考了7分的话再看这本书.建议你看些简单的书.分享一下我的经验吧.我第一次考雅思的时候写作只买了8分万能作文.背了几篇.最后作文考了4.5,第二次考雅思复习的是80天攻克雅思写作,有看了顾家北的雅思范文(我只看了容易的部分和自己觉得能用得部分).结果第二次写作考了6.5.其实这两本书真的不错.作文是很多人的弱项.如果作文本来就不好.不如一步一步来.先不要看8分万能阅读.真的没用.。
四、雅思作文(范文/模板)
雅思小作文写作万能模板 1、通过第一个曲线图,我们可以知道____,也说明了结果是___ According to the first graph, it can be seen that ______________, it can also be concluded from it that ______________. 2、一张有趣、有教育意义的、(内容)的图片(这句模板在雅思小作文中的应用非常的广泛。)
There is an interesting and instructive picture which goes like this: __________. 3、当前有一张涉及______的增长曲线图,许多人______,然而其他人倾向于___ Nowadays there is a growing concern over ______________. Many people like ______________, while others are inclined to ______________. 4、目前,共同之处是_________,许多人喜欢______因为_______除此之外还由于_____ Nowadays, it is common to ______________. Many people like______________ because ______________. Besides, ______________. 5、(图表所示)_____,就像许多其他事物,被____更加喜爱,然而这一观点正被________所抨击,一些人认为_________,他们指出___________ ______________, just like many other things, are preferred by ____________. While being attacked by the idea that ______________, some people consider ______________. They point that ______________. 1 according to the chart``` 2 the date lead us to the conclusion that``` 3 the date show``` 4 the tree diagram reveals how``` 5 the figures show``` 6 this is a cure graph which describes the trend of``` 7 the pie graph depicts``` 8 the graph provides some interesting date regrarding``` 9 the table shows the changes in the number of ``` over the period from ```to ``` 10 as is shown in the table ``` 11 from the table ,we can clearly see that ``` 12 this table shows the changing proportion of X and Y from ``` to ```` 13 the graph,presented in a pie chart, shows the general trend in``` 14 as can be seen from the grape ,the two curves show the flutuation of ``` 15 over the period from ```to ```the```remained level. 16 in the year between ```and ```. 17 in the 3 years spanning from 2005 through 2008. 18 the number of ``` remained steady from ```to ````. 19 the number sharply went up to ``` 20 the percentage of ``` stayed the same between ``` and ``` 21 the percentage remainede steady at``` 22 the percentage of ```is sightly large than that of. 23 there is not a great deal of differece between ```and ``` 24 the graphs show a three fold increase in the number of ``` 25 ```decreased year by year while ```increased steadily. 26 there is an upward trend in the number of ``` 27 a considerable increase occurred from ```to ``` 28 from ```to ```the rate of decrease slow down. 29 from this year on,there was a gradual declinel reduction in the ```reaching a figure of. 30 be similar to ```be the same as 31 there are a lot similarities between ```and ``` 32 the difference between X and Y lies in ``` 雅思学术性写作考试中Task 1 考查考生解释,说明信息的能力,这些信息通常体现在图解,表格和插图中,这一部分的模式化程度更高一些。下类50个句式是雅思留学类考生需要背诵的最最基础的句子。
请同学们自己背诵。在写作小作文的时候,也可以作为参考材料。
1. the table illustrates the changes in the number of。over the period from。
to。 该表格描述了在。
年之。年间。
数量的变化。 2. the bar chart illustrates that。
该柱状图展示了。 3. the graph provides some interesting data regarding。
该图为我们提供了有关。有趣数据。
4. the diagram shows (that)。 该图向我们展示了。
5. the pie graph depicts (that)。. 该圆形图揭示了。
6.this is a cure graph which describes the trend of。 这个曲线图描述了。
的趋势。 7. the figures/statistics show (that)。
数据(字)表明。 8. the tree diagram reveals how。
该树型图向我们揭示了如何。 9. the data/statistics show (that)。
该数据(字)可以这样理解。 10. the data/statistics/figures lead us to the conclusion that。
这些数据资料令我们得出结论。 11. as is shown/demonstrated/exhibited in the diagram/graph/chart/table。
如图所示。 12. according to the chart/figures。
根据这些表(数字)。 13. as is shown in the table。
如表格所示。 14. as can be seen from the diagram, great changes have taken place in。
从图中可以看出,。发生了巨大变化。
15. from the table/chart/diagram/figure, we can see clearly that。or it is clear/apparent from the chart that。
从图表我们可以很清楚(明显)看到。 16. this is a graph which illustrates。
这个图表向我们展示了。 17. this table shows the changing proportion of a & b from。
to。 该表格描述了。
年到。年间a与b的比例关系。
18. the graph, presented in a pie chart, shows the general trend in。 该图以圆形图形式描述了。
总的趋势。 19. this is a column chart showing。
这是个柱型图,描述了。 20. as can be seen from the graph, the two curves show the。
五、雅思写作指导:如何写雅思小作文
雅思小作文经常出现描述图表题,其分值约占写作部分的三分之一,由于其所占的比例较低,经常被考生所忽略.但是事实上,这类图标描述题类型可控,文本使用上比较正式,语言上比较固定,因此考生们只要掌握了标准时的描写风格,以及一些固定的语言搭配,往往更加容易掌握,也是比较容易在短时间提高分数的一个题型. 要做到短期内拿下图表描述题,你就需要深入了解小作文的类型,写作难点.图表描述题虽然在形式上复杂多变难以掌握,但是万变不离其宗,语言固定,形式固定,你需要做的就是以不变应万变. 图形描述题的难点之一是难以在短时间内找出该题需要表达的重点,其次缺乏此举,缺少书面表达的语言和亮点.对于题型出现的这些难点,南京环球雅思老师提出一些相应的建议,帮助大家克服考试中出现的这些难点. 一、寻觅小作文需要表达的重点 二、了解图形的分类规律 三、准备必要的表达方式 四、注重连词的使用 五、Integrity and Perfection 雅思小作文经常出现描述图表题,其分值约占写作部分的三分之一,由于其所占的比例较低,经常被考生所忽略.但是事实上,这类图标描述题类型可控,文本使用上比较正式,语言上比较固定,因此考生们只要掌握了标准时的描写风格,以及一些固定的语言搭配,往往更加容易掌握,也是比较容易在短时间提高分数的一个题型. 要做到短期内拿下图表描述题,你就需要深入了解小作文的类型,写作难点.图表描述题虽然在形式上复杂多变难以掌握,但是万变不离其宗,语言固定,形式固定,你需要做的就是以不变应万变. 图形描述题的难点之一是难以在短时间内找出该题需要表达的重点,其次缺乏此举,缺少书面表达的语言和亮点.对于题型出现的这些难点,南京环球雅思老师提出一些相应的建议,帮助大家克服考试中出现的这些难点. 一、寻觅小作文需要表达的重点 见到图形表达题,你心中就需要思考这个图形题需要表述的重点在哪里.作答时先说明再梳理数据.切不可将文章写成账本式的文字,否则,你就会得到很低的分数. 例如:The graph shows how the amount of water used worldwide changed between 1900 and 2000. Throughout the century, the largest quantity of water was used for agricultural Purposes, and this increased dramatically from about 500 km to around 3,000 km in the year 2000. 文章的主句应该对文章要表达的趋势,量的大小作出说明,相关的数据则补充在后面.雅思小作文考察的精髓还是查看考生的英文表达能力,精简凝练.你的描述要让阅卷者脑海中浮现出图形的样本,数量和趋势等等相关变量.如果你能达到以上这些要求,那么小作文本身也就基本上合格了. 二、了解图形的分类规律 图形描述题,按照标准图形来分,可以分为line graph (curve), bar chart, pie chart以及table,按照表达重点来分,分为趋势类和大小类,分类依据于题中的时间列表.一般来说,出现时间段的图形题都是以描述数据变化趋势为主. 三、准备必要的表达方式 1.与趋势有关的词语: 上升(动词):increase, rise, climb, ascend, surge, shoot up 下降(动词):decrease, decline, drop, fall, descend, plunge 持平(动词):remain stable, keep constant, level off, flatten out 波动(动词):fluctuate, wave, go up and down 快速(形容词/副词):considerable/considerably, significant/significantly,substantial/substantially,remarkable/remarkably, dramatic/dramatically 稳步(形容词/副词):steady/steadily, stable/stably, moderate/moderately, modest/modestly 缓慢(形容词/副词):slight/slightly, minimal/minimally, marginal/marginally 顶点(名词 /动词):peak 趋势(名词):trend/ tendency 2.与大小相关的词语: Outnumber (动词):在数量上超过The demonstrators were outnumbered by the police Exceed (动词):在数量上超过 Triple (动词):变成三倍The figure has tripled. Double (动词):变成两倍The price of houses has virtually doubled over the past few years. Mount to (动词):达到 Counterpart (名词):对应的另一方,比较的另一方 this product is better than its counterparts 此外,建议考生还应考虑一下题中数据和百分比有没有联系,如果有的话还应添加一些数据所占百分比的语句. 3.相关词语: 百分比(名词):proportion, rate, percentage, share 占据(动词):occupy, comprise, constitute, account for, represent. 数字:number, amount, data, figure 比例:rate, proportion, percentage, share 大约:roughly, about, nearly, approximately, a little less than, slightly more than 各自地:respectively, for each,severally 四、注重连词的使用 连词在语句中起着承上启下的作用,添加连词,可以增加文章的逻辑感,使得文章更加严谨,同时,文章中连词的使用也要讲究一定的形式,我们在文章中一般称之为形连. 五、Integrity and Perfection 文章有了恰当的表达方式,还需要进行一些细节方面的修饰,添加数据时,形式要整齐划一,有不随便删除和添加数量单位,增加连词的使用,加强文章的严谨度,采用一些多样化的数据添加方式,是文章看。