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At Mid-Autumn Festival, more than 12 million people climbed Baiyun Mountain in Guangzhou. I went there with my father, mother, grandpa and my uncles family too. In the morning my father drove the car and we set out.

When we got there, it was lunch time. Baiyun Mountain looked very beautiful. Everywhere was clean and tidy. We could see green plants and colorful flowers here and there. Red lanterns were hanging on both sides of the road. But it was very crowded on that day. So after lunch, we decided to go up by cable car.

英语作文怎么得高分

你的作文水平要高，我根据自己的经验，如果实在没有英语作文的天赋，你可以试试多背一些范文，有些句子，背过了，用在作文中是很有用的！作文的内容和题材都是大同小异的，背一些组句的公式句，很实用！ 其次，你的文章要多用一些出采的句子，让批卷的老师有眼前一亮的感觉：多用一些不同的句势，象强调句，定语从句等，还有一些的好词组也重要，象很简单的as when all know,by the way 等，也是很管用的哦！ 还有非常重要的一点是，你的书写一定要工整呀，这样取悦了老师，你的分数也自然而然的就高了。

具体来说：最好用颜色深的笔写，词与词之间的距离要大一些，构成每个单词的字母之间的距离也要适中。 以上说的这么多，都是我在英语作文中取胜的“法宝”，呵呵~希望能给你以启示，最后祝愿你的作文能越来越好！！。