荐：2007年英语高考作文赏析,请老师打分,用英文给李华写一篇毕 -

第三行remind 用的不对，应该用recall，回忆起。

逗号应该改为句号。第四行very首先拼错了，前面用了very后面最好不要出现，英语里比较忌讳重复。

第五行fail,feel，应该用过去时 ，exam 前面要加the.felt terrible 就可以了，不要再加sad，比较罗嗦。encourage, help用过去时。

go over，复习，直接跟名次，不要with. 第二段最后完成时用得很不好。 blessing，保佑，不好，应该用wishes。

last 前面应该加will。 总评：低级错误较多，几乎每一句话都有问题。

没有偏题。25总分，大概在10-12分之间。

2007年全国卷的英语作文是什么

是要找这个吗？07年高考英语作文全国卷Ⅰ假定你是李华，希望通过外籍教师Peter找一个英语笔友。

请写一封短信，描述一下你理想中笔友的条件，并说明为什么选这样的笔友。具体条件包括：年龄；性别；爱好（旅游、运动、宠物等）。

注意：1.词数100 左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.开头语已为你写好。Dear Peter, I am writing to ask whether you are able to do me a favor. Best regards, Li Hua范文：Dear Peter, Im writing to ask whether you are able to do me a favor.I want to have a pen friend, hopefully a girl in her early twenties, and with interests similar to mine. In my mind, she is someone who is interested in traveling, swimming, and playing table tennis. Besides, it would be better for her to have a pet dog as I have kept one at home for some time. With such a pen friend, I think I can share with her our traveling experiences, taking care of pets, or whatever we have in common. And I believe I will improve my English by doing so and learn more about her country.I look forward to hearing from you soon。

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2010 广东高考 英语作文

第一节基础写作（共1小题，满分15分）以下是一则 关于中国政府决定禁烟的 报道的主要内容。

内 容：公共场所禁烟 实施时间：2011年1月1日起实施范围：全国 目 标：所有室内公共场所无烟措 施：张贴禁烟标志相关数据：（1）吸烟人数：约3 5亿 （2）分 布：男性75%；女性25%(3)受二手烟影响人数：约5 4亿（4）因二手烟死亡人数：超过10万/年*二手烟：second-hand smoke[写作内容] 请根据以上内容给学校英语墙报写一篇通讯，内容包括：1、禁烟决定的内容及实施的时间和范围； 2、目标和措施 3、相关数据。 [写作要求] 只能用5个句子表达全部内容。

[评分标准] 句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。参考范文：My country begins to carry out the policy that prevents smoking in public buildings since January 1st2011. The main aim is to make every public room has no smoke by posting the sign of preventing smoking. There are 350 million people smoking recently in which the male hold 75 percent and the female hold 25 percent. Because of these smokers about 540 million non-smokers are influenced. More than 100 thousand people per year die because of the second smoke.第二节读写任务（共1小题，满分25分） 阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。

In junior high school, one of my classmates, Ethan, was addicted to TV. This boy simply knew everything about such pop shows as Whos the Boss?Then one day Ethans mother made brim an offer in order to draw him back to his school subjects. She promised that she would give him $200 if he could go a full month without watching any TV. None of us thought Ethan could do it, but he did quite well. His mom paid him $200. He went out and bought a TV, the biggest he could find.In recent years, hundreds of schools have carried out experiments with paying kids with each for showing up or getting good grades. All school kids admire this trend. But it upsets adults. Teachers say that we are rewarding kids for doing what they should be doing of their own will. Psychologists warn that money can actually make kids perform worse by making the act of learning cheap. The debate has become a typical battle over why our kids are not learning at the rate they should he despite decades of reforms and budget increases.[写作内容] 1、以约30词概括上文的主要内容。2、以约120词对用金钱鼓励孩子学习的现象进行议论，内容包括：（1）、你对用金钱鼓励孩子学习的看法： （2）、你的父母（或其他亲人）是如何鼓励你学习的；（3）、你认为怎样才能更好地鼓励孩子学习。

[写作要求] 1、作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事.也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。2、作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。

[评分标准] 概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，语篇连贯。参考范文：The passage tells us Enthans mother and many schools rewarded kids with cash to improve their performance and change their bad habits.However,psychologists point out it will cause negative consequences. As far as Im concerned…..encouraging kids with cash will….Take one of my classmates as a typical example,he …..As a result,not only did he not become a good student but worse still,it aggravated his sereve situation.Being no exception,my parents also care about my studying.but they…..Finally,I became a top students in my class.From what has been mentioned above,we can drew the conclusion that….On one hand…..On the other hand…..only in these ways can parents make their kids grow up healthfully.读写任务还需改进，希望能帮到你啦 O（∩_∩）O~。

历年山东高考英语作文题（2007-2010）

2006 山东卷： 请用英语写一篇100词左右的短文，简要描述漫画内容，并结合生活实际，就漫画主题发表感想，题目自拟。

参考词汇：公民道德—civic virtue范文：Who Lose Civic Virtue?One day, a child went home after class. On his way home, he saw some adults spit on the ground. On the other side of the road, a man threw the garbage on the ground after eating a banana. The child found a book Civic Virtue, lying on the ground. So he picked up the book and shouted, “Who lose civic virtue?”The childs words should make people think more. Now, many people are scared of civic virtue, and dont protect public environment at all. I wish this cartoon can wake their virtue and make our life better.2007 山东卷： 阅读下面的文字，用英语写一篇120-150词的短文。今年，教育部直属师范大学将招收一批免费师范生，学生毕业后须回生源所在省份的中小学任教十年以上。

你愿意成为一名免费师范生吗？请陈述理由。_____________________________________________________________________________________范文：Recently I learned from the newspaper that normal universities师范大学（belonging to the Education Department） would recruit some students free. As a return, the students must serve as充当 a primary school teacher for at least 10years in his hometown. I feel that is good news for me and I will contact联系 the universities to get enrolled被录取.First of all, as a farmers child, my familys living conditions is not so good, I can hardly afford the high tuition of regular universities正规大学. I am so happy to get this chance to become a college student and continue my study.Secondly, serving as a teacher is my dream since I was a child. I was brought up in a mountain village. Many of my little friends got poor education and they had to get to work as a teenager. If I become a teacher, I will devote myself to giving them better education.Lastly, our country is in great need of teachers, especially in rural areas. After I graduate, I will return to my hometown and serve as a good teacher.2008山东卷： 假设你是新华中学的学生张华，班里从外地转来一名同学李明，他一时无法融入到新的班集体中，感到很苦恼。

请根据下列要点用英语给他写封信：1、帮他分析原因；2、给他提出建议；3、陈述你帮助他的具体打算。注意：词数120 ~150Dear Li Ming,____________________________________________________________________________________Best regards,Zhang Hua范文：Dear LiMing,I know you are now having trouble communicating with others, and you may often feel lonely. Thats because you are new here and people dont know about you. But I think you can make it搞定 if only you can follow the advice below.First, you should take an active part in the discussions and show your own opinions about the matters, and at the same time, learn to listen to other peoples views. Second, you should learn about your classmates likes and dislikes. Then you can have much in common with有共同点 them. This way, you can get to逐渐的 know more different people and show them that you are just as friendly. Last but not least, Im always here ready to help. We can take part in some activities together and I can introduce you to others.With time going on随着时间的推移， people will know you better and will like to make friends with you if you can do as按照 the above以上.Best regards, Zhang Hua2009山东省的高考英语作文范文Dear Tom,I am now back China and sound. In this letter I would like to convey my heartfelt appreciation to you for your kind assistance in my English learning when I was in New York. Additionally, your generous help and tender care made me feel warmly welcomed and transformed my first American trip into a unforgettable memory.I have been missing our English professor, Mr.Smith whose unusual cast of mind,wide and varied knowledge,together with a singular personal charm,combined to exert a strong influence on me.What about him recently? I desire to contact him for some suggestions on improving my listeningability.However,his email address is not available.So would you mind delivering it to me via the online mailbox?I am more than delighted to invite you to join us to celebrate the Spring Festival -Chinese Lunar New Year so that I can repay your friendship.You can partner with me to have a try in lion dances ,which is extremely exciting. And the grand lantern festival parade will be bound to impress you. I assure you that you would enjoy visiting here as I did at you home.With my best regards !Yours cordially, Li Hua最后祝你成功加油加油啊。