TOEFL TPO25 综合作文求修改 200分满分谢谢

以下仅就语法问题修正如下：

The arguments of both the writer and the lecturer are focusedon the use of clay vessels for electricity production. The writer presents his assumptionsagainst its existence in three aspects including the [blackness?] ofmetal wires and conductors, the findings in a similar city and the limited knowledgeabout electricity at that time. However, the lecturer strongly opposes all ofhis assumptions.

The writer starts with his first assumption that thesevessels cannot be used for power generation because there is no evidence showingthe existence of conductors and metal wires. The lecturer, however, objects himby pointing out that those vessels were dug out by local people and just threwthem away because they thought them of no use. Therefore, it is unconvincing asnobody knows the truth.

Then the writer mentions an exploratory report about theuse of another city nearby the city in discussion and further mentions that scientistsfound no evidence showing copper cylinders were used for assembly like holdingsacred. But the lecturer opposes to it, saying it does not prove anything [becauseone thing can do a similar thing and can surely adapt any other one这句不知所云].

Finally, the writer thinks that ancient people do notneed electricity because they do not have any electrical appliance. But thelecturer thinks electricity is very useful for ancient people especially fordoctors as they may need it to heal pains from muscles and bones, and it isalso beneficial to those who want to show magic power to others in order to provetheir power. It is therefore pretty useful.

In summary, the lecturer and the writer are contradictorywith each other on this topic.

托福写作25分要达到什么样的水平

我也初三！你也是高申吧哈哈哈好激动啊哈哈哈第一次考的时候20分，然后第二次就25分了。

其实我也没觉得我写作水平有什么提高词汇句型什么的我觉得没什么关系的，只要把要表达的东西表达清楚，把事情说圆满了就可以了综合写作不要漏重要的点，要是写出来的文章可以让没有看过阅读文章或者听过听力的人也能知道主要内容的话分数肯定不会低了独立写作嘛，逻辑清楚，每个点里面都有具体的例子。综合写作建议多些几篇，独立写作只要方法大致知道写个1,2篇考前练练手我觉得就够了。

对自己有信心啊！！我这种弱逼都25了你一定可以的！！！！。

托福写作范文照抄会被扣分吗

不建议盲目搜索范文。

网上流传的各种“托福写作范文”来源并不明确，范文质量没有保证，盲目模仿或照抄而来的作文未必是一篇高质量作文。照抄范文会造成不同考生作文中出现雷同语句的情况，在作文评分时的机器“查重”这一关评价会很低。所以，模仿或照抄范文写托福作文，很难得到理想分数。

想要提高托福写作成绩，最权威的官方范文请参考托福考试机构 ETS 出版的托福官方指南（official guide，简称OG）,OG 上明确了托福写作的评分要求和应对策略，并且给出了独立写作和综合写作各个分数段的范文和考官评价。OG 比其它写作教材更有针对性，也更具权威性。

另外，范文的意义在于参考，想要获得理想的托福作文分数，不能仅仅依靠背诵或套用范文。准备托福写作，重点是要看考试的评分要求，并且对照自己的情况，做针对性的能力训练。

可以按照以下步骤进行：

1. 熟读 OG 上关于写作的评分要求，认真研读官方的满分范文。

2. 做一套 TPO 写作题目（包括独立写作和综合写作），找到自己的作文和满分作文的差距。

3. 根据内容、结构、语言三个方面的能力强弱，制定一个有针对性的训练计划。

比如，内容方面需要观察生活、积累作文素材；结构方面得研究议论文的写作框架；语言方面要多学习别人地道的表达。如果是听力或者阅读问题，导致综合写作不好，则要强化听力和阅读。

4. 做阶段性的能力测试（比如每周做一套 TPO），实时掌握自己的能力提高情况，并对计划作出调整。