求雅思剑桥9的test1大作文范文的翻译

Childrens education has long been our concern since Plato once uttered, "Education is where a country should start at." However, it is still a controversial issue after all these years among people who are particularly concerned about it. Some people believe that it is parents responsibility to cultivate their kids to be fully aware of what a social being should look like; others, whereas, argue that schools should take over this for the ultimate goal. In this essay, I would put this issue in question and further analyse both sides before presenting my personal perspective.

On one hand, parents, as the first touchers of their kids, should tell them how to differentiate right from wrong. Given the time parents spend with their kids, they can be more likely to observe everyday change of their children. As a result of this, they are accountable for how their children normally behave in reality. More importantly, considering the fact that people according to their social being are usually placed into diverse norms, parents, as a family, as a part of community and as individuals in the society, should appropriately behave in action so as to deliver a message to their kids in which what should be respected and cherished in lives is highly highlighted.

On the other hand, academic institutions should take the responsibility for educating students to be entirely ready to enter the society. After leaving parents for schools, kids almost devote their most prime time at schools with their peels, their friends and their teachers; therefore, schools ought to put much emphasis on their growth as a person. Consequently, students could learn what they cannot acquire from home, such as communicative skills, understanding of various cultures etc.

雅思阅读九分达人test1第一篇的答案有没有人知道呀？？？求急用,谢

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雅思剑5test1小作文 求评价

The line graph describes some data about the percentage

=》是不是可以改成 The line graph describes the percentage。

aged 65 and over

=》aged 65 and older ?

As can be seen from this line graph,there is an increasing trend in the number of old people in three countries.More precisely,the percentage of population went up gradually from 9% in 1940 to 15% in 1982 and it will remain stable at 14% in 2018（那个国家？）.After that（去掉？），the proportion of population aged 65 and over is expected to reach 23% in 2040.Similarly（跟什么说similarly，前后说的好像不一样） ，the proportion of population age 65and over in Sweden accounted for 7% in 1940 to 26% in 2040（对将来数据的预测，时态是否不对？）.While,the percentage of population aged 65 and over in USA remained steady at 5% by the end of 2008,After that, there is a substantial surge and occupies at 27% in 2040（对将来数据的预测，时态是否不对？）.

Therefore,it shows that the percentage of 65+ people are soring moderately in the next three decades.（ 未来三年应该是数据预测，不是shows吧。。。，另外，soring moderately，适度的飙升？有点矛盾？）

soring => soaring

剑桥雅思7test1表格作文,希望高手予以批改,20分不多,但保证送出

The data indicates that consumer spending on different items from five different countries in 2002,including Ireland,Italy,Spain,Sweden,and Turkey.The first section consists of Food,Drinks,and Tobacco.Specially,Turkey is accounted in 32.14% and Turkey spends more money on Food,Drinks,Tocbacco than other countries.The statistics from Italy,Spain,and Sweden were similar in the first section.Accroding to the data,the second section is made up of Clothing and Footwear.9% from Italy is the highest percentage and the lowest percentage is Sweden.The third section is Leisure and Education.The percentage of Italy and Sweden are 3.20% and 3.22%.Turkey spends money on Leisure and Education is 4.35% which is the highest percentage in the third section.As the table shown,most people would like to spend more money on Food,Drinks,and Tobacco and spend less money on Leisure and Education.修改完毕！请LZ给分吧 ⊙﹏⊙。

雅思小作文批改（剑5test1）

The graph illustrates the dramatic comparison of the population proportion aged 65 and over from year 1940 to 2040 in three countries.

In Japan, its population proportion started in the year of 1940 at a tendency of going from 5% to approximate 3% in 1960, followed by a stable trend before restarting to the original level in year 2000.

In view of Sweden and USA, which both countries demonstrate a constantly increasing movement of the population, started itself from 7% and 9% to 16% and 14% respectively during the same period as Japan.

It is worth mention that the expected proportions in three countries, especially Japan are blessed with a noticeable rising of population, which raised sharply to 27% over the last two decades. As to the other countries, Sweden and USA have all experienced a moderate increase in population by hitting to 25% and 24% each, although Sweden suffered from a little turbulence in years from 2000 to 2020.

楼主英文水平很好，接近西方的结构写作，但语法稍微注意一下，有个别词汇还是要了解一下运用的方法，（英文同义单词很多，但写作时每个都有不同的用途）。还有尽量不要写数字，像 3 countries 要写成 three countries 看起来会比较正式一点。

我尽量改的都改了，也不会是完全对，只给LZ一个参考。