谁能介绍下考研英语看图作文范例并点评呢？

看图作文在英语作文中是大家普遍缺乏练习的一种类型，一个提高的方式就是看范例和点评，针对其中的错误进行自我修正。

考学生or烤家长： 写作原文 In the given picture, there are many parents standing at the gate of (outside)the examination room。 As we see, they are so worried that the sweat began (begin)to pour down their face。

In china, it is common knowledge that the exam decides (may determine)the future of children。 Hence, it reflects the problem that the （加上current Chinese表意更完整）educational system is unreasonable。

In fact, the problem has existed for several years。 Especially in china, the examination score decides the childrens development in the future。

（语法正确，但句意不合理。改为the examination score may influence childrens future development。

）In a sense, the examination seems to be the only standard that chooses the talents(can be used to select talents)。 Furthermore, it is so terrible educational system (the educational system is so terrible)。

I think we must take some effective measures to solve this problem。 In my opinion, we should adopt the following measures。

On the one hand, we should reform the educational institution and establish a more flexible approach to choose the talent (select talents)。 On the other hand, parents should give up the idea that the exam is the only key to judge (measure)childrens ability。

总体点评 本文立意正确，内容切题，结构完整，需注意以下问题：1、文章的立意虽然正确，且深入切题，但文章的内容不够丰富充实，原因分析不够深刻。 第二段在分析造成现象的时候提出了三点“考试决定孩子的未来”“考试是选拔人才的唯一标准”“教育制度很差”——“考试为什么会决定孩子的未来，它怎样决定了孩子的未来？”“为什么是选拔人才的唯一标准？（在现有的实情方面，因为其他方法难以实施和操作）”“教育制度很差，体现在什么方面？”2、文章内容的衔接逻辑不是很清楚，如第二段先说“考试决定未来”后说“考试是选拔人才的唯一标准”，而实际上“正因为在目前考试是选拔人才的唯一标准，所以考试在某种意义上决定了孩子的未来”。

3、文章依然存有少许汉式思维的句子，有的词组搭配不合理，应在此方面加强。多模仿一些经典佳句。

因此，建议作者以后在写作之中不要提笔就写，先列出一个大纲，把自己的思路理顺，使自己的文章逻辑清晰，通顺流畅。 参考分数（满分20分）：12 英语写作水平的提升需要不断地练习，在改正错误中不断取得进步，不怕犯错误，怕明知道犯错误却不面对。

看了范文和点评，希望大家有思考，有提高。

考研英语看图作文范例是什么？ -

写作原文 AS Is（注意大小写） shown above, a funny hen claimed that her eggs with(that后面应该跟的是从句，从句中应包含谓语动词，建议将with改为have) no edge and the like which is the most fundamntional（拼写错误，改为fundamental）.（作者这句话是要表达什么内容？）Simple as the drawing is, the symbolic meaning behind ti（改为it） is as deep as ocean（注意句末标点）Honesty is not only necessary, but also indepensible（拼写错误，改为indispensable）.As the old Chinese proverb says:"Honesty is gold." However,in no country other than China, it has been said that, the problum（拼写错误，改为problem） of opposite the pormise（拼写错误，改为promise） more serious（句子逻辑关系不明确，改为the opposite of the original promise is more serious）,and people fail to attach attention to the "gold". Individuals and organizations can make money, take porfits（拼写错误，改为profits） and even obtain wealth by attend promise.To be honest can also have added （改为add） benefit of increasing ones knowledge, giving us a new perspective of outside world. According to a survey conducted by China Acadmy（拼写错误，改为Academy）of Science(CAS),honesty can relieve not only pressure but also anxiety and such problums（拼写错误，改为problems）as depression, stress, isolation and solitude（注意句末标点）All in all,obtain（改为obtaining，一句话中只能有一个谓语动词）the promise plays a key role in our daily life.The unhonest（改为dishonest，表示“不诚实的”，没有unhonest一词）， in view of the complexity of such issue,we must treat it socially,economically and culturally.with（首字母大写） a proper law, an up-to-date solution, a right perspective and alert public,it will be a matter of time before the problum（拼写错误，改为problem） becomes things of the past.（最后一段缺乏逻辑关系，建议重写） 总体点评 作文能够按照写作要求来写，写作格式基本符合要求。

但是文中的问题较多，比如：单词的拼写问题、语法问题、句子的逻辑关系问题等。希望作者在后面的复习中，先不要急于写文章，从基本的入手，先积累词汇、学习基本语法、积累并模仿高分语言佳句；将重点放在语句模仿上，有空多读外文期刊，了解英语的地道表达，从而不断提高自己的写作水平。

建议作者将每周的时间做一个合理的规划，一周练习一篇作文即可，在练习这篇作文时，可先积累此方面的词汇，之后两天可查找有关方面的经典表达及例文，然后再模仿佳句，等这些都做到位时，再组织文章。

高考英语看图作文看图作文,描述我和父母乘车去乡下叔叔家给奶奶过

这是1992年的高考题，范文如下： May 31st Sunday Fine It was Grandmas birthday. Father, mother and I went to visit her. She lives with my uncle in a village which is not far away. Early in the morning we bought some presents and took the bus to get there. Grandma and Uncle were very glad to see us. We gave the presents to Grandma and she was very happy. Then we sat down to talk,while Uncle went to prepare lunch. The meal was so nice that we all enjoyed it very much. At 4o clock, we said goodbye and set off for home.。

【初中英语看图作文的注意事项】

看图作文就是要求根据图画（或表格）的内容展开合理的想像，写出文章的一种写作方式.看图作文应做到以下几点： （1）认真读图，弄清大意：读图时要充分理解图画所表达的内容，弄清图中的人物在干什么，弄清图画背景与人物之间的联系，弄清事情发生的经过. （2） 理出要点，拟定提纲：读图之后，要根据图画表达的主要内容，理出表达的要点.列出要点时要注意分清主次，不能看到图中有什么就认为什么要写.看图作文时描述图画内容是不可取的，应充分展开想像使图画活起来.理出要点之后，就可以根据要点拟定提纲，即把整个图画中要表达的内容先用一句话写下来. （3） 紧扣要点，扩写成文.在列出要点后，依据已经写出来的话语扩写成一篇短文.扩写时，可运用想象适度发挥，紧扣图画的内容，进行适当叙述，连贯通顺即可. （4） 通读短文，修正错误.写好文章之后应通读全文进行检查.在检查时，应着重看短文是否扣住图画的内容，要点是否有遗漏.同时，还要注意有无语法错误，如时态、人称等，是否符合文体特点、格式等等.。

求两篇看图英语作文！

下面四幅图描述了Tom帮助老人的经过。请根据图意和提示词讲故事，要求语意连贯，条例清晰。

提示词：rain,forget to,tie。to。,go together

yesterday is a rainy day, the rain is so heavy that nearly darken the sky. when tom was on the way to the school , he saw an old man was soaked by the rain because he didnt have umbrella in his hand.sOn seeing this,tom closed him, the oldman told him heforgotto take umbrella before setting out. when heard of this ,Tom wanted to help something for the oldman , but he found his umbrella was too short to fit for the oldman. Through the several minutes of thinking , he got a good ideal. he tiedthe crutchtohis bottom of umbrella,then ,it looked much longer for the oldmen height. the oldman and Tom were both smiled, at last ,Tom and the old man go togetherhappily.

下面四幅图描述了peter的父母如何迫使他学习。请根据图意和提示词讲故事，要求语意连贯，条理清晰。

As many parents expect to their children, Peters parents also hope his son have bright future. they think ,it is necessary to have training class for peter at his spare time. so they arranged some training class for him ,such as play the piano,take art lesson,and so on. the peter , except of doing the homework, he must be also do well with other training class to favor expection of his parents.so he was very busy with them all day long and he couldnt find the time for real himself. one day , finally, his body couldnt hold any longer but fell apart under such burden . he got sick and be sent to the hospital.

初中英语看图作文 急~~~

晕，现在国内到底要干什么？上次看到初中英语作文的时候说他老师要求写500词+的议论文，这里又来个小学水平看图说话。。

我帮楼主写了一篇简单的，如果太简单的话你可以跟我说。

In a sunny afternoon, Little Bear took his lovely kite to the lawn near the woods. Little Bear held his kite in the right hand and strings in his left fist, and ran against the blowing wind. The kite flew up in the air, and wathcing it, the bear was immersed in happiness. He ran and ran and ran when a weird gust of wind swept over and brought Bears kite into the tree, which really upset Little Bear.

吃饭了，等会儿继续。

接上：He pulled and tried to get the kite, but he failed. Uncontrollably, Little Bear burst into tears, and Giraffe heard his cries and came around, asking,"Whats the matter?" Little Bear replied,"My kite has been stuck in the tree, can you help me?" Giraffe generously offered him an answer of "Yes" and ran to the tree, streched his long neck, fetched the kite off the tree and came gladly to hand it over to Little Bear. The bear felt on top of the world and replied "Thank you!" continually.

写完才发现好像不是想的那么简单，额，仅供参考。