以An argument为题写一篇英语作文

In my fathers opinion,study is the most important thing to a Grade 9 student,and watching TV is completely a waste of time.Whats more,he says that I can hardly control myself when watching TV and it

will do harm to my eye sigh.

However,as far as I am concerned,watching TV give me a feeling of relax after a days study.Moreover,through watching TV,I can gain more knowledge and know about what is happening in our world.

Finally,we reach an agreement that I will be allow to watch news,sports and science programs on weekend.

马上就要考GRE作文了,argument按时间做的写得不好,恳求高手帮

arguer作主语用单三啊~~ 别总是it is entirely possible 的~~ 偶尔还有一些语法错误， 第一段第三行WHICH 后加was， 第二段最后一句有问题~~ 不过文章挺成型的了~~最后一段也可以具体点，针对那三个错误， to better assess the recommendation, we need more information about blablabla.the author is supposed to supply more specific evidence to illustrate。

多背几句就行了~~ 就看了一遍~~哈哈~~我水平也不行~~哈哈~~应该4分~~加油~~。

以an argument为题为《英语广场》写一百字英语作文

I like watching TV, but mother doesnt agree with me. She says this is my third year in high school, and watching TV too much time would surely affect my studying, even worse as I would fail the coming college entrance examination. Whats more, she says, watching TV will weaken my eyesight. I dont think mom is right. We need relaxation during studying, and watching TV is a good way to get relaxed. In watching TV we can widen our outlook, and know the world better, and be better prepared for life and work after graduation from university。

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