求2012年上海中考英语作文范文

Knowing that you care too much about the result, I am quite worried. Actually, it is no use being upset despite the importance of the result. There are some effective ways to calm down. Above all, keeping reminding yourself to stay in peace is the most helpful. Besides, it will help you to relax if you spare some time for recreational activities like sports. Finally, talk to your parents and friends, who are always ready to comfort you. As is said by Steve Jobs, “the journey is the reward.” I am sure you will get through this situation.。

2009年上海中考英语作文看看有没有语法错误,能打多少分

Ive noticed that the library of my school hasnt enough books 这一句，应该是doesnt have 而不是hasnt 语法错误就这么一个，但是有很多地方的遣词用句需要改进，否则会严重影响文采分.如果不加以修改，这篇文章可以打15分（3分扣在：1分语法错误，2分文采）had no choice but to read one book with another student. "read“改成"share" I like reading , so i have a lot of books,including some useless ones.改成"I like reading and I have a plenty of books that I no longer need" I think its my duty to donate these books for my school 改成"I think I could a little favor for my school, donating these books. " (duty这个词太重了，你对学校没有那样严肃的义务责任关系，所以改成favor会好很多)they will be helpful to many younger students改成"I believe that theyll be beneficial to many younger students"。

2o12年英语中考作文

VII. Writing （作文）： （共20分）

99. Write a letter in at least 60 words according to the given situation （根据所给情景写一封不少于60词的信）

Suppose you are Joe. Your friend Betty is upset about a coming exam for she cares too

much about the result. What do you think? Try to offer her some advice. （假如你是Joe， 你的好朋友Betty 因为过于在意考试结果而感到焦虑。请给她写一封信，谈谈你的看法，并给她一些建议。）

（注意：文中不得出现任何姓名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。）

这是2012上海中考英语作文题目

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Dear Betty,

Knowing that you care too much about the result, I am quite worried about you. Actually, it is no use being upset despite the importance of the result. There are some effective ways to calm down. Above all, keeping reminding yourself to stay in peace is the most helpful way. Besides, it will help you to relax if you spare some time for recreational activities like sports. Finally, talk to your parents and friends, who are always ready to comfort you. As is said by Steve Jobs, “The journey is the reward.” I am sure you will get through this situation.

Yours,

Joe

2011上海中考英语作文 《I am a member of

In this world , every family has a mother.a father.a daughter or a son.For plenty of people ,families are very important .when you are very said ,you can found one or two persons to make you feel happiness ,this is you family . I am very gold to become my family member,beacuse i have a pertty good parent and a fairly younger brother . when i come back,i always feel freedom and relaxed.My mother is a kind cook ,she has lots of experience in cooking ,so my brother and i are heathly. As a daughter,l shouldnt make my parents worry .As a sister ,l should look after my brother .l want to be a great member of my family ,l would try my best to do what l should do in the family。

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求2011年上海中考英语作文范文

Im a Member of the Singing and Dancing Club

Hello, everyone! Im very glad to be a member of the Singing and Dancing Club. I have been in this club for 2 years. Im an actor in the club. I like singing and dancing very much. I sing and dance with my classmates on weekends. Though I am very tired, I like to sing and dance every day. It makes me feel very happy.