有人说雅思写作准备30篇就够了,是真的吗？如果是,是哪30篇？-百

你好，很高兴为你解答：雅思写作应注意一下几点：1、注重写好文章的框架我曾经问过我们的外教老师， 外国人看文章最注重的是什么， 他告诉我说是文章的framework. 即一篇文章好不好， 首先看的不是他的句型， 词汇， 或是论点等。

而是段落之间的衔接一定要十分清楚，我们不能老是采用大三段的形式-开头，经过， 结尾。我们可以多用用连接词， 例如：first of all, morever, secondly, lastly等，另外可以多分自然段， 给考官一目了然的感觉。

还有我们可以多看看国外的文章， 看看他们的写作模式， 我当初写文章的时候， 用的就是我看到一篇国外文章的模式，我觉得可以套用， 我最后介绍给大家。2、句型的多样化如果一篇文章， 从头到尾， 永远用的只有一种句型， 那么这篇文章一定拿不到高分，我们可以适当的改换一下句型， 我给大家一定建议，希望给大家有点帮助。

3、基本句型包括 Ⅰ.主谓句；Ⅱ. There be；Ⅲ. 主系表结构的句子；Ⅳ. 被动语态（我看到一张帖字说， 不要用被动， 我不这样认为， 国外的文章， 用被动的也比比皆是。）4、复杂句型 包括 Ⅰ. 并列句；Ⅱ. 从句（定语，状语，名词性，非谓语）5.词汇的Variety说实话做到这点真的很难， 首先你要有庞大的词汇量，第二你要用的恰当，不出错误。

我自认做不到这点，所以我用的词汇有时候会重复。当然大家可以累计一些固定搭配的词汇，例如：激烈的竞争 fierce competition等6、多举EXAMPLE（重要）大家不要小看这点， 我认为对于写作基础不是很好的考生来说， 这点是最重要的。

一篇文章如果让你从头到尾都在讲道理， 你有这么多话要说吗？而且有时候还不一定说的清楚。那么这时候你就用例子来表明你的观点。

我认识一个朋友， 可以说她的英语基础很差， 但她的文章也拿了6分， 我问她怎么写的， 她告诉我说就是拼命的举例子。就这点我也曾问过外教老师， 他曾是IELTS的考官， 他说考官欢迎考生多举例子。

7、建议：1）、写文章最关键的就是审题千万不要出错误， 不然就前功尽弃了。2）例如我积累的句子：Cultivate independenceDevelop a strong sense of responsibilityEnhance social awarenessBuild up one's confidence and offer one's a sense of achievement—realize ones value and capacityWiden one's horizon and sharp one's character这些句子比较常用， 而且在口语考试中也可以派上用处。

最后给大家介绍一种写作模式，我觉得很不错：With unprecedented advances in medical technology, a debate has developed over whether or not a person on life support has the right to die. On one side of the debate are those who say that。

On the other side is the view that。

In my mind, I completely agree/disagree the later .There is no denying that 。

has many positive effects. To begin with,。

Secondly, 。

Finally, 。

However, every coin has its two sides. 。

is no exception. Many opponents say that 。

To conclude， 。..祝你取得理想雅思成绩！！！。

关于雅思写作我看了三十多篇满分文章,然后找了很多句型我就把他们

前提是给你一篇文章的时候你能不能够把这些东西运用到你的写作中去。

考官主要看语法，你的整体文章的语法有没有错误，如果你的模板用的很高难度的语法，但是你加进去的内容在最基础的语法中都有错误，直接判定为抄写。另外你加进去的内容跟你的模板逻辑之间关系是否正确也是考官判断你是否抄袭的一个标准。

建议在开头或者结尾的总结陈述是可以用上模板，正文中的连接词部分也可以使用模板，但是论点方面还是需要自己的补充。只要多举几个例子来论证论点，字数绝对是不成问题的。

另外，你平时准备的这些句子在考试的时候并不能完全的使用，建议平时练习的时候就一直使用这些句子。最好是根据自己的英文水平来练习。

我写了一些雅思作文 但是不知道该给谁修改..我很迷茫

楼主要求作文需要达到多少？6?6.5?7？如果只要6的话我可以给你介绍下我的方法~~我考了3次雅思~~前两次没怎么练作文~~第一次作文5分~~第二次5.5~~后来自己总结了个方法~~练了几把~~~又考了一次作文6~~~

我的方法很简单不过也很费时间

首先要看~~看过30篇以上小作文和大作文的范文~~这是基础~~~

然后总结~~小作文分4种模式总结：趋势，比较，排位（就是最大，最小，中等），流程

总结的时候每种模式把各个类型的句子都从范文里挑2-3句，例如：

趋势的句子：the proportion saw a considerable growth in xxx（主题）to an all-time high of xx% in 2000, before declining strikingly to somewhere in the vicinity of xx% in 2001. This was followed by a remarkable fluctuation prior to 2005, with a high of xx% in 2003 and a low of xx% in 2004.

这个是我自己写的一个描述方式，感觉最少是个6分的句子吧应该~~就像这样把所有趋势，两者之间的比较，排位的描述性句子都挑几个不同的好的描述方式记下来~~

大作文就麻烦点~~如果只要6的话就总结出4个框架~~态度对立，态度不对立，描述优缺点，解释原因提措施

态度对立比如“假期是否应该旅游”，态度不对立比如“有些人说假期应该花在旅游上，有些人说应该花在学习上”

然后从范文里挑各种类型的好词好句子好材料记下来，比如说网络的缺点就记下“pornography”

总结完之后就是练~~先写10篇不掐时间的作文~~可以翻笔记的~~熟悉下记的词语句型怎么用~~然后开始掐时间写~~写完以后照着自己的笔记改~~一定要照着笔记改~~这样改几篇下来你笔记上的词就很熟悉了~~~哪些地方能用到笔记上的词、句子、材料就换换~~大概练个10来篇

只要语法别太低级~~只要能用上你笔记上的词或者句子~~再加个好框架~~6分肯定没问题了·~~

如果想冲7~~我觉得吧框架不能太生硬的套~~~语法基础必须棒~~不只是棒~~还要地道~~符合习惯~~再加上5 6个生词~~或者加两句地道的名人名言~~~另外论证的材料必须准确合适~~

以上只是一个英语偶尔能过6级的人的看法~~哈哈~水平不高~~不过通过3次不同分数的作文~~我对考官的评分标准还是有所了解·~哈哈·

30字的英语作文（带翻译）

I went to the home for the aged with my friends on July 30th. As soon as the eldly people saw us, they were all happy. We sang songs and danced for them. Then we helped the worker clean the rooms and washes the clothes. They praized us a lot and said that we were good boys. Although we felt tired, we had a good time.

我在七月30日和朋友去了敬老院。那些老年人一看到我们就非常高兴。我们给他们唱歌、跳舞。 然后我们帮助那里的工人们打扫房间、洗衣服。他们夸赞我们是好孩子。尽管我们感到很累，当我们过得很愉快。

求雅思作文10篇

你好，很高兴为你解答：雅思写作7分范文：International tourism has brought enormous benefit to many places. At the same time, there is concern about its impact on local inhabitants and the environment. Do the disadvantages of international tourism outweigh the advantages?Tourism is a very big industry in the modern time and is growing quite rapidly. Thousands of people travel everywhere to various destinations every year. Arguments have come up regarding the benefits and negative impacts of tourism in places and on its local inhabitants and environment; however, I believe there are more advantages than disadvantages of international tourism.People travel for various reasons; we travel for business purposes, holidays, visit friends and relatives etc. Travelling is mostly seen as a recreational activity. Tourism has many advantages. Tourism can play a tremendous part in a countrys economy, the more tourists visit a country and spend money there, the better it is for the country; that way more money is circulated within the country and even the stability of their currencys rate of exchange persists if not improve. Vendors and shops get to sell more goods and make an income. Tourism also has its non-monetary advantages; it brings cultures and people closer. People from all around the world get to share their culture with each other and even learn more. This is a good opportunity in education.Tourism seems to have some disadvantages too; However, I believe the problems caused by tourism are not something that cannot be solved or prevented. A lot of people believe that tourism can destroy or deviate culture and causes quite an impact on visited locations, such as pollution and littering. People can adhere to their own beliefs and way of life if they want to; no one can really forcefully influence someone to change from their morals and ethics. Pollution can be avoided by increasing usage of environmental friendly vehicles used for tours and rents, warnings and visual education on littering and smoking, specific times can be allocated for tours to certain areas, such as peak times where local inhabitants feel uncomfortable due to too many foreigners.Where there are problems there can always be solutions. Tourism brings great amount of advantages for any place in many ways and is a “win-win” exchange process. The very few problems caused can always be avoided or taken care of. I believe tourism should be highly promoted, specially in traditional and poor countries with natural beauty such as Thailand.（雅思7分作文）祝你好运，取得理想雅思成绩！！！如果你需要雅思学习资料和雅思备考资料可以在百度HI里和我沟通，我传给你~~。