【求一篇雅思作文范文或者思路.09.12.5日考的一篇Nowadays,

我是世纪雅思学生，我问我们老师，一下是我的老师给回答的：In present-day society,plastic containers and utensils are extensively used in big cities and the countryside alike.They are so common-place and I would hazard the guess that each one of us has seen,at one time or another,the unsightly scene of plastic bags swirling in the wind.These plastic shopping bags,chopsticks,to-go boxes and mineral-water bottles,to name but a few,when not properly disposed of,create a colossal amount of non-biodegradable refuse.Therefore,some people argue that we have embarked upon a “throw-away” era when plastic rubbish is largely dumped indiscriminately and irresponsibly (this act is often labeled “white pollution” on account of the color of plastic wastes).Personally,I wholeheartedly support their view.There are numerous reasons for this worrisome phenomenon coming into being.To begin with,at present the bulk of people who shop and/or eat out regularly are still poorly-informed,uninformed or misinformed about the pernicious influence that non-biodegradable pollutants exert on the ecosystem,which is the main culprit in the global-scale mishandling of the plastic wastes.The chief component of such trash is polythene,which cannot decompose on landfill sites over the process of the next hundreds of years if no major scientific breakthrough comes along in polythene treatment.Thus,such trash must be dealt with collectively rather than be scattered like tumbleweeds.Secondly,the proliferation of plastic shopping bags and eating ware is largely fuelled by the surging,headlong consumerism.Plastic containers and utensils are lighter in weight,cheaper (often free of charge) in price and water-proof in performance.These superior properties make them preferable to their paper and cloth counterparts in customers' eyes; and as consumer satisfaction reigns supreme in contemporary society,compared with superb portability,affordability and utility,how to dispose of them is the last thing the customers are concerned about.Additionally,plastic bags,wrap and containers are also commercially feasible since they are cheaper to manufacture,ship and store.These mercenary considerations also have prompted the good old cloth or paper bags to be supplanted by plastic bags but over the phasing-out process,few stores and restaurants advocate or encourage the use of environmentally-benign disposal of plastic trash,hence the whole slew of non-biodegradable garbage and environmental hazards ensue.Given the scale and severity of “white pollution”,we must take immediate steps to address this scourge.In the first place,we must do our utmost to enhance people's awareness of how persistent and devastating non-biodegradable trash can be to our environment and our posterity's.Secondly,retail stores and dining establishments should spare no effort in encouraging their customers to reuse plastic packing items.Furthermore,indiscriminate and irresponsible dumping of household garbage or personal junk should be outlawed by the legislature and heavy fines or even jail terms must be imposed on those compulsive litterbugs who fail to get their act together.Then,on the part of the biochemical researchers and technologists,scientific research must be launched here and now in pursuit of effectual ways to convert non-biodegradable refuse to biodegradable refuse.Last but not least,the government must not shirk its obligations in mobilizing scientific resources and rallying popular support in the crusade against “white pollution”.Neither should pay just lip service to relevant research and campaigns if no enough funding can be obtained otherwise.Additionally,I am convinced a customer tax levied by the government on the use of plastic bags will also help to curb this massive “white pollution”.The havoc non-biodegradable refuse can wreak on the ecosystem is beyond our imagination.It can eventually devastate soil,water and the aquatic and terrestrial biota.We must start combating this environmental catastrophe before the ecosystem irretrievably breaks down under the reign of the minute plastic debris.要是还有需要，请和我们世纪雅思的老师沟通吧~。

求雅思剑桥9的test1大作文范文的翻译

Children's education has long been our concern since Plato once uttered, "Education is where a country should start at." However, it is still a controversial issue after all these years among people who are particularly concerned about it. Some people believe that it is parents' responsibility to cultivate their kids to be fully aware of what a social being should look like; others, whereas, argue that schools should take over this for the ultimate goal. In this essay, I would put this issue in question and further analyse both sides before presenting my personal perspective.

On one hand, parents, as the first touchers of their kids, should tell them how to differentiate right from wrong. Given the time parents spend with their kids, they can be more likely to observe everyday change of their children. As a result of this, they are accountable for how their children normally behave in reality. More importantly, considering the fact that people according to their social being are usually placed into diverse norms, parents, as a family, as a part of community and as individuals in the society, should appropriately behave in action so as to deliver a message to their kids in which what should be respected and cherished in lives is highly highlighted.

On the other hand, academic institutions should take the responsibility for educating students to be entirely ready to enter the society. After leaving parents for schools, kids almost devote their most prime time at schools with their peels, their friends and their teachers; therefore, schools ought to put much emphasis on their growth as a person. Consequently, students could learn what they cannot acquire from home, such as communicative skills, understanding of various cultures etc.

求《慎小嶷十天突破雅思写作》及《6-9的作文范文》的word版本

你好，很高兴为你解答：

雅思写作应注意一下几点：

1、注重写好文章的框架

我曾经问过我们世纪雅思的外教老师， 外国人看文章最注重的是什么， 他告诉我说是文章的framework. 即一篇文章好不好， 首先看的不是他的句型， 词汇， 或是论点等。 而是段落之间的衔接一定要十分清楚，我们不能老是采用大三段的形式-开头，经过， 结尾。我们可以多用用连接词， 例如：first of all, morever, secondly, lastly等，另外可以多分自然段， 给考官一目了然的感觉。还有我们可以多看看国外的文章， 看看他们的写作模式， 我当初写文章的时候， 用的就是我看到一篇国外文章的模式，我觉得可以套用， 我最后介绍给大家。

2、句型的多样化

如果一篇文章， 从头到尾， 永远用的只有一种句型， 那么这篇文章一定拿不到高分，我们可以适当的改换一下句型， 我给大家一定建议，希望给大家有点帮助。

3、基本句型包括 Ⅰ.主谓句；Ⅱ. There be；Ⅲ. 主系表结构的句子；Ⅳ. 被动语态（我看到一张帖字说， 不要用被动， 我不这样认为， 国外的文章， 用被动的也比比皆是。）

4、复杂句型 包括 Ⅰ. 并列句；Ⅱ. 从句（定语，状语，名词性，非谓语）

5.词汇的Variety

说实话做到这点真的很难， 首先你要有庞大的词汇量，第二你要用的恰当，不出错误。我自认做不到这点，所以我用的词汇有时候会重复。当然大家可以累计一些固定搭配的词汇，例如：激烈的竞争 fierce competition等

6、多举EXAMPLE（重要）

大家不要小看这点， 我认为对于写作基础不是很好的考生来说， 这点是最重要的。一篇文章如果让你从头到尾都在讲道理， 你有这么多话要说吗？而且有时候还不一定说的清楚。那么这时候你就用例子来表明你的观点。我认识一个朋友， 可以说她的英语基础很差， 但她的文章也拿了6分， 我问她怎么写的， 她告诉我说就是拼命的举例子。就这点我也曾问过外教老师， 他曾是IELTS的考官， 他说考官欢迎考生多举例子。

7、建议：

1）、写文章最关键的就是审题千万不要出错误， 不然就前功尽弃了。

2）例如我积累的句子：

Cultivate independence

Develop a strong sense of responsibility

Enhance social awareness

Build up one's confidence and offer one's a sense of achievement—realize ones value and capacity

Widen one's horizon and sharp one's character

这些句子比较常用， 而且在口语考试中也可以派上用处。最后给大家介绍一种写作模式，我觉得很不错：

With unprecedented advances in medical technology, a debate has developed over whether or not a person on life support has the right to die. On one side of the debate are those who say that。。 On the other side is the view that。。 In my mind, I completely agree/disagree the later .

There is no denying that 。。has many positive effects. To begin with,。。Secondly, 。。 Finally, 。

However, every coin has its two sides. 。。is no exception. Many opponents say that 。

To conclude, 。..

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雅思作文想不出素材

可以看看《十天突破雅思写作》，里面有个“裸奔法”

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Technology & Efficiency

Mind & Soul

Society & Crime

Time & Space

Rights & Responsibilities

Envionment & Health

Employment & Competition

Culture & Population

Money & Fun

一共18个词，分九组。记熟这些单词后，拿到一个题目，都可以从这些方面思考。

真有雅思满分作文吗

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显然写作不是雅思最难的单项，应该排在口语之后。这也是中国国情决定的。中国考生重精听精读，轻写作口语，这是显而易见的。

其实听说读写中只有写作是非native speaker可以超过local的一项，且是唯一的一项。这一点慎小嶷老师早已提过，这里我就不再多说。

雅思写作评分标准如下：

TR(TaskResponse任务完成情况)

这是评分标准中的第一项，具体体现在是否满足AIE上。A指Argument，即要有辩论；I指Idea，即论点；E指Evidence，即论据。

CC(Coherence&Cohension连贯和衔接)

连贯和衔接分为意连和形连两方面。所谓意连，指一个段落必须围绕一个主题句展开，前后在语意上达到统一和完整。体现在具体的雅思写作过程中时，我们要学会判断哪些观点和例证相符合。对于形连，它的主要表现形式是段落之间和段落内部的连接词。在写作过程中，我们要恰当使用表示承接和转折的连接词（如To Begin With, In Addition, However等）以及句子之间的指示词（This,It等）。

LR(LexicalResources词汇资源)

这一点虽然各种英语作文考试中都会涉及到，但雅思教会我们并不是尽可能使用大词，而是使用恰当的词表达确切的涵义。而且文章内部的语体、风格也要一致。这一过程中我们不但要掌握常用词的同义词，还要辨析其不同的适用语境，同时也要学会用自己的话进行转述。

比如对于题目要求的陈述，传统上学生习惯于将原题抄写一遍，对付汉语作文也不例外，但雅思规定抄原题不算字数。

GR&A(GrammaticalRange&Accuracy语法范围和精确度)

这又有别于传统的为了使用复杂句子而去使用的写作思路。因为除了要会用，还要用得准确和恰当。我们在准备雅思的过程中，不仅要学会如何造句，还要学会每一种句子所适合的语境、语篇。

当然，还有很多细枝末节的东西我这里就不写了。剑桥雅思系列里面有详细的解释。

你所谓的“中国首篇雅思作文”实际上已经没有参考价值了。毕竟今日雅思考试的难度不是N年前可以相比的。而且现在仅仅语法错误一项就可以让你的写作分数惨不忍睹。因为在评分标准中的第四条明确提到了“不仅要学会如何造句，还要学会每一种句子所适合的语境、语篇”。

考官的作文通常是剑桥雅思真题系列后面的范文，可以说是一个满分或者是接近满分的标准。而且考官都是接受过统一培训的，但是个人风格又不同，所以你说的“衡量其他作文”这种说法是不存在的。因为他们必须按照上述四点评分标准来对考生的作文进行评分。

雅思写作拿9分难度相当高这点我承认。但是就算听力和阅读，能拿9分的人也是需要相当高的人品值才能做到。只能说，对于大多数英语学习者来说，雅思单项在8分以上都是可遇不可求的事。但是你要是说最难的单项，必然还是口语了。