剑桥雅思6 写作 test2 第一篇小作文 书上只有一个6分的考生作文 求范

雅思写作参考书，我选哪本

在雅思考试当中最让人头疼的可能就是写作了，见过太多的从4.5到5.5挣扎很多次却依然距离6分很遥远的同学，惋惜之余，也在想什么原因导致了这些同学的悲催现状呢。

辅导资料我们并不缺，市面上各种写作指导不下30种。写作理论体系也不缺，什么单边式，双边式，让步式，不一而足。对于一个7分的文章应该是什 么样，大家也是各说各的。虽然有我们有统一的评分标准的指导，但是什么人的解读最有效呢？聪明的同学已经猜到了，当然是雅思考官。考官的标准才是我们唯一 需要遵循的标准。而考官的标准去哪里找呢？毫无疑问，答案在剑桥雅思真题的范文。

我们现在用的最多的复习资料就是剑桥雅思的真题。大作文写作有一个明显的特点，那就是虽然话题多样，提问形式多变，但是常考的话题也就那么几个，从剑桥4-到剑桥8，包括A类和G类文章在内，共有30个题目，基本涉及到了过半数的雅思写作话题了。对于小作文，常见的四种图形--线图，饼图，柱图，饼图--以及两种不常见的图形--地图和流程图--每一种类型在剑桥真题当中都有所涉及。

因而，同学们再准备写作的过程当中首先要做的就是要将剑桥真题当真的9分考官范文做到熟读成诵，熟悉其写作套路，思维模式和常见句型。这样，我们就会发现，其实很多市面上写作参考书里面的分段理论，开头结尾段的理论，甚至一些常见的句型和短语，如in terms of, with regard to等，都来自于官方范文。这样，如何锻造出一篇高分作文，对我们而言将不再是秘密。

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求剑桥8雅思作文范文

《剑桥雅思8》Test1大作文范文 Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 分析：这道题是问儿童教育应该谁来负责，是家长还是学校。

Children's education has long been our concern since Plato once uttered, "Education is where a country should start at." However, it is still a controversial issue after all these years among people who are particularly concerned about it. Some people believe that it is parents' responsibility to cultivate their kids to be fully aware of what a social being should look like; others, whereas, argue that schools should take over this for the ultimate goal. In this essay, I would put this issue in question and further analyse both sides before presenting my personal perspective. On one hand, parents, as the first touchers of their kids, should tell them how to differentiate right from wrong. Given the time parents spend with their kids, they can be more likely to observe everyday change of their children. As a result of this, they are accountable for how their children normally behave in reality. More importantly, considering the fact that people according to their social being are usually placed into diverse norms, parents, as a family, as a part of community and as individuals in the society, should appropriately behave in action so as to deliver a message to their kids in which what should be respected and cherished in lives is highly highlighted. On the other hand, academic institutions should take the responsibility for educating students to be entirely ready to enter the society. After leaving parents for schools, kids almost devote their most prime time at schools with their peels, their friends and their teachers; therefore, schools ought to put much emphasis on their growth as a person. Consequently, students could learn what they cannot acquire from home, such as communicative skills, understanding of various cultures etc. From what was previously well stated, my point of view can be generated that parental education should be highly cooperated with formal education in the process of a child's growth. What contribute to a person to become an entity are interpersonal skills and intrapersonal qualities; however, as for the parental education and formal education, the ultimate goal of a person which is to be taught to be a proper member of society cannot be fulfilled without either one of these.。

雅思小作文求批改+评论 内容：剑桥8 test 2

第一段changes -----varies第二段spending---expenditure on this leaped by 10%, reaching the proportion of 50%第四段There was a downward trend. It decreased from 28% in 1981 to 22% in 1991. Consequently, it descended to only 5% in 2001.最好连成一句吧 There was a downward trend, which subsided from 28% in 1981 to 22% in 1991, and consequently descended to merely 5% 10 years later第五段experienced up and down---fluctuated,spending---expense结尾 时态不大对。

按你原来的可以改成 In a word, the most principal segment turned out to be the salaries of teachers, occupying approximately half of the overall expenditure. The fluctuation of spending on other issues, such as insurance and resources, could be witnessed as well。.。

雅思作文求评分,谢谢啦

我觉得你写的不错，结构很清晰，论点和论据一目了然。长短句结合。也有例子具体的分数我不好评，因为我的作文也就考了6.5.我就说说我认为的不足的地方吧，希望能帮到你。

第一是按照你的观点，你认为先工作旅游是好的，那么主体写的时候最好先写你不同意的观点。也就是把你这两个主体段换一下位置。第二是如果你想拿高分，最好能用上一些好词来代替比较普通和简单的表述。第三是我觉得最后的conclusion说这样可能会让年轻人找到一些方向这个观点应该是一个新的观点吧？你的支持段里并没有说到这个好处。而结论段式不允许出现新的观点的，应该是总结你的陈述。如果你想加上这个支持观点可以写进主体段里。然后综上所示，虽然先工作旅游有一些缺点，但是它既可以增长知识，又可以帮助青少年更好的实现目标。所以你支持先工作旅游这一观点。

总体来看六分以上是绝对没问题的，如果结合你小作文也不错的话，六点五的可能比较大，当然没准儿对哪个考官的胃口七分也不是没有可能的。

剑桥雅思考官给的范文,1--8的大作文都属于哪几类啊~比如教育之类

我记得原来慎小嶷有一本书是十天写作还是几天来着，那里头有，而且比较好，我建议你看看，那个书帮助不小，其实没有背的必要，但是对于一个问题，你要有key point，譬如说，人家问你，如何改善现在的空气质量，你不用背写好了的，但是你要知道你要从那几点，那几个方面来写，主要就是背思路，并不是背诵整片文章，而且个人觉得作文重在联系，我当时写了有20多篇，随着联系的增多，你就能有自己的写作思路，这样慢慢的你写啥都不觉得费劲了。

不知道你的要求，一般六分很简单，你把你想说的表达明白了，清楚了就行了，基本没有小错儿，就差不多。

所以，总结起来就是，对于每个类型，你都要有几个key points，你要知道你想围绕那几个点说，找找点了，慢慢就能扩充了。

希望对你有帮助！

剑桥雅思8的test2阅读答案

Test 2

Listening 部分

1 Milperra

2 First Class Movers

3 28 November

4 screen

5 bathroom

6 door

7 140

8 leg

9 plates

10 60

11 B

12 (the) Forest

13 Fish Fam(s)

14 Market Garden

15 C 16A 17C 18B 19C 20A 21A 22B 23C 24 A

25 insepects

26 feeding/eating

27 laboratory

28 water

29 wings

30 reilable/accurate

31B 32B 33A 34A 35C 36C 37B 38F 39D 40C

Reading 部分

1 spinning 2(perfectly) unblemished 3 labour/labor-intensive 4 thickness 5marked 6(molten) glass 7(moiten) tin/metal 8rollers

9TRUE

10NOT GIVEN

11 FALSE

12TRUE

13 TRUE

14 II

15 VII

16 IX

17 IV

18&19 BC

20 A

21 H

22 G

23 C

24 C

25A

26B

27 VIII

28 II

29 VI

30 I

31 III

32V

33 C

34 A

35 C

36 D

37 clothing

38 vocabulary

39 chemicals

40 cultures

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