1.一篇英语短演讲稿,修改一分钟的演讲.我写好了.就一初中演讲,别改

I think models are very important to EVERYONE.only those people who have done something very well can be your models.You will easily be influenced by what your models do or say because you like them.Of course,you may have more than one model,each teaching you different things.A model OF POLITENESS teachES you how to be polite.A model of kindness teachES you how to be kind.If you have a model,you will never feel lonely.If you have a model,you will konw how to do something that you feel difficult.If you have a model,you will have moTIvAtion to pursUe your dream.With many different models for you,your life will be happy.When everyone learns from his models,the world will be better.。

2.一篇英语演讲稿,请帮忙修改.Hello,

你好我是初三的一位学生 我觉得你用的语法会不会太简单啦？还是你怕错误才用简单的语句的.我想你最好能用点从句 既然是演讲稿就要有点水平自己也有面子嘛我给你举个例子吧 我只是建议啊 毕竟我不是专业的我觉得你开头有点太废话也有点死板 能缩点吗 以从句来增加文章的长度today's topic is the aim of Senior High School Entrance Examination .my idealschool is the Baoan high school for it's comfortable situation and system.我就给你举这么个列子 你自己在看看 因为没个人的想发不一样 反正 你不要老用简单句嘛。

3.谁能帮我修改一下这篇英语演讲稿

Good afternoon,everyone!today,I am pleased to be able to stand here and give you a short speech.The topic of my speech is “my travel”.I hope you will like it.Most people like to travel,because travel can relax themselves.When I travel,I can enjoy the mountains,rivers,sky,animals.They are beautiful and they make my own mind become better.During the travel,I can see the different custom in defferent places,eat different food,and enjoy the different lives.Travel develop myself in body and in mind.You can travel by car or bus sightseeing.you can walk.you can take a lot of photos.you can visit many places of interest.Look,it is interesting how ah!Do you want to make friendly people?Do you want to close this nature?Do you want to be more outgoing?Go for a travel with your family or your friends,you will have a great time.Thank you very much!PS.我英语六级，离初二很远了，实在不清楚现在初二的孩子英语到底处于什么样的水平，所以不敢改多了.英语演讲重在表现自己的过程，内容怎样其实无所谓的.加油哦。

4.【请帮我修改一篇英语演讲稿~Teacherandstudents,IamOpahWenfrey

Teacher and students,Good morning(afternoon) everyone..It is a great honor for me to take part in this compitetion and introduce myself to all of you.my Englishname is Opah Wenfrey ,well,lindan is also my name,Have you heard about it?Of course you are,the olympic champion lindan who is a handsome boy playing badminton and has made contribution to our country,he is a hero in my heart ,I am very glad to have the same name as him ,though it is simple,but it is a lucky name .I want to make some difference in my life like lindan.And I believe i can do it with the simple and lucky name.。

5.英文演讲稿修改

1attached to the world (lost in the world)

2I want to live in the world!(I want to live in the world which is full of spells!)

3Oh,and I want to travel around the world in the future（估计这个OH 演讲不好说，你斟酌一下）

4It will bring me enjoyment（建议ENJOYMENT换掉如joy,rejoice,ecstacy）

两分钟的演讲的话，你找个录音的工具自己调整速度和语气吧，字数好像多了一点点，你可以说我想会魔法又会医术的话，可以调侃一下，自己是巫医，应该是幽默元素吧，如But if i really become a doctor with a magic band in my pocket,i would be banned as a voodoo(witch doctor).DOTA里不有个巫医么，别人听到BAN了巫医就笑了。