1.一篇英语演讲稿,请帮忙修改.Hello,

你好我是初三的一位学生 我觉得你用的语法会不会太简单啦？还是你怕错误才用简单的语句的.我想你最好能用点从句 既然是演讲稿就要有点水平自己也有面子嘛我给你举个例子吧 我只是建议啊 毕竟我不是专业的我觉得你开头有点太废话也有点死板 能缩点吗 以从句来增加文章的长度today's topic is the aim of Senior High School Entrance Examination .my idealschool is the Baoan high school for it's comfortable situation and system.我就给你举这么个列子 你自己在看看 因为没个人的想发不一样 反正 你不要老用简单句嘛。

2.帮忙修改这篇英文稿子,谢谢

1.The Characteristic(s) of America Education Be sensitive with complimentary and critical remarks.Do not compare one child to another.Do not compare students with each other.◎Think a lot of benefit practice and but make light of reputation （我不是很理解你这句话的内容.）Emphasize more on cooperative learning and make light of elitism.Encourage cooperative learning and discourage elitism.2. My view of American education ,summarizing in three sentences.◎NO CHILD LEFT BEHIND ◎The Wind Of Freedom Blows ◎Made In China Be sensitive with complimentary and critical remarks.◎我不同意你说的关于美国教师不在公开场合表扬学生的观点.相反他们公开大力表扬学生，但是他们表扬时，是表扬什么行为，而不是空洞地说某个学生好，听话. 我可不可以给出我的意见？（ Can I say a few words?）American teachers always believe in positive teaching. Whenever they make compliments, they emphase on specific good behaviors. For example, the teachers would say,” I like the way Johnny sits.” Or “ I am so proud of Mary. She cleans up her toys today.” “Compliment on David for using the magic words with his classmates.” Remarks like these are clear and fair so that other children know very well what the teachers expect them to do. When the teachers make critical remarks, again it is the undesirable behaviors that should be addressed. “ I am so disappointed that Johnny didn't do his homework. “ David, it is very rude to do that. Do you want others treat you the same way you treat them?” Remarks like these are avoided,” Linda is good . David is bad . The teachers don't purposely set up role models or elites. All students are considered excellent as long as they do what they are told.◎Do not to compare to others student Do not one child to another.The American teachers think that there are many ways to weigh things so they never compare one student to another. Because they think each individual is unique. They respect the differences of each student. They believe everybody can learn, just not on the same day, or the same way. They organize instructions so that all students are given the opportunity to learn what is being taught. Of course, American students would never go through this “nerve breakdown and heartbeats pounding when reading everybody's grades on a bulletin board.因此，美国学生没有体会过看成绩排名时心中乱跳的感觉（不会翻><）。

◎Encourage cooperative learning and discourage elitism.In American schools students learn about group cooperation or teamwork. Everybody can make contributions to a group project. When children take part in a contest, they care more about the process rather than the rankings. They are taught to feel good about themselves. Some children are talented in art. Some children are talented in math. So everybody is special in a certain way.。

3.【麻烦帮修改英文演讲稿,

Unity and diversity With the development of global economic,communicate with people who are living in every corner of the world plays a very important part in social life.A universal language is needed urgently.At this time,English comes to our lives.There is no doubt that English did a good job in our routine.People all over the world could communicate easily with the help of English.But,at the same time,we should be aware that many languages are disappearing,especially in third world countries.According to Unesco,a language dies every two weeks.By the end of this century half of the world's spoken languages – 6,912 according to Ethnologue – will disappear.The more pessimistic forecasts say 90 per cent.Languages die when they are no longer spoken.This happens for various reasons.First of all when those who speak the language die because of natural disasters or genocide.When Europeans eradicated the inhabitants of Tasmania,in the nineteenth century,many languages died with them.Just like,within two hundred years from the arrival of the Europeans in America,many,many languages died together with 90 percent of the indigenous population killed by diseases imported by the colonizers.But in nowadays,the most important reason why a lot of language disappear is economic.The market now is globalised,with communities prefering the stronger ones.It's the end of geographic isolation.Urbanization and globalization create a scene made of global languages for global markets and dominant cultural models,to which new generations aspire and adapt,often preferring to abandon their origins,from cultural to linguistic identity,because that model is perceived as better.。

4.一分钟英语自我介绍稿子,求人帮忙修改QAQ

人名地名特指名词，首字母要大写。

Now I'studying要改成Now I'm studyingI like play要改成I like playingfather and mather、grandmother happy life together要改成I live with my grandmother,my father and my mother happily.for socially要改成in the societyI like winter,I don't like summer要改成I like winter,but I don't like summer。

5.一篇英语短演讲稿,修改一分钟的演讲.我写好了.就一初中演讲,别改

I think models are very important to EVERYONE.only those people who have done something very well can be your models.You will easily be influenced by what your models do or say because you like them.Of course,you may have more than one model,each teaching you different things.A model OF POLITENESS teachES you how to be polite.A model of kindness teachES you how to be kind.If you have a model,you will never feel lonely.If you have a model,you will konw how to do something that you feel difficult.If you have a model,you will have moTIvAtion to pursUe your dream.With many different models for you,your life will be happy.When everyone learns from his models,the world will be better.。

6.帮忙修改英语介绍

tall 2 students 改成 Senior High School student

regularly 改成 often

but also not hate sports 改成 I still love sports

Love sports前加I

In my free time like playing badminton改成I'd like to play badminton in my spare time.

A person at home like surfing the Internet, or music.改成While I was staying at home by myself,I usually surf the internet,or listening to music.

Don't like long immersed in the world加I

the book family once told me， 改成I read from the books that

I don't think the first-class personal,only first-class team改成I don't think it's too personal.I'm in the first-class team

So I'm like the team cooperation.改成I enjoy cooperating in the team.

希望能帮到你吧~

看了你的中文翻译。又改了一下

tall 2 students 改成 Senior High School student

regularly 改成 often

but also not hate sports 改成 I still love sports

Love sports前加I

In my free time like playing badminton改成I'd like to play badminton in my spare time.

A person at home like surfing the Internet, or music.改成While I was staying at home by myself,I usually surf the internet,or listening to music.

Don't like long immersed in the worldthe book family once told me， 改成I don't like toimmersed inthe world of books.

the book family once told me， 改成I read from the books that

I don't think the first-class personal,only first-class team So I'm like the team cooperation.改成No one is the best,but only groups.So,I love to cooperate with others.

希望能帮到你吧~

7.【请帮我修改一篇英语演讲稿~Teacherandstudents,IamOpahWenfrey

Teacher and students,Good morning(afternoon) everyone..It is a great honor for me to take part in this compitetion and introduce myself to all of you.my Englishname is Opah Wenfrey ,well,lindan is also my name,Have you heard about it?Of course you are,the olympic champion lindan who is a handsome boy playing badminton and has made contribution to our country,he is a hero in my heart ,I am very glad to have the same name as him ,though it is simple,but it is a lucky name .I want to make some difference in my life like lindan.And I believe i can do it with the simple and lucky name.。