1.剑10 test1 小作文什么意思

剑10test1 小作文，家用能源和气体排放 The above two charts depict the Austrilianhousehold energy use and the corresponding gas emissions of each type of energyuse.From the first pie chart we could see thatwater heating and heating are two major types of energy use, which occupies 30%and 42% of all the energy used in one household. Other appliances use 15% ofthe energy, and then refrigeration, lighting and cooling, which share the left13% of energy.Figures in the second chart are quitedifferent from that of the first chart. Heating, which consumes 42% of a household'senergy, only emits 15% of all the gas that one household produces. But the gasemission and energy use of water heating are pretty even, at around 30%. Costs only7% of all the energy, refrigeration produces 14% of all the gas, which goes forthe condition of other appliances and the figures are 15% and 28%, and for thecondition of lighting, 4% and 8%. Cooling consumes 2% of energy and contributesto 3% of gas emission.To sum up, water heating and heatingconsume 72% of energy and produces only 47% of gas. Refrigeration and otherappliances, though only use 22% of energy, emit 42% of gas.大作文， 教小孩是非观要不要从小时候就开始教， 要不要punishment Indeed, children need to learn how to tellright from wrong as they grow into adults. But as far as I am concerned, it isbetter for us to teach this ability to them when they are older rather than atan early age. Moreover, certain punishments are required to make sure childrencould behave themselves.For starter, it would be easier for us toteach children about the difference between right and wrong when they becomeolder. Young children, due to their lack of life experience, have difficultiesin understanding moral lectures. However, after they grow up a little, theycould better digest the meaning of what is right and wrong based on their pastexperience, thus will grasp the notion of right and wrong more easily andthoroughly.Similarly, older children tend to know moreabout punishment, and will be able to learn from the punishment caused by theirfail to recognize the distinction between right and wrong. Punishment mighthave long-lasting influences on younger children for they are too fragile. Olderchildren, on the other hand, could handle punishment more with ease and couldfigure out the reason they got punished. Therefore, they could gain betterunderstanding about right and wrong than younger children do.The sort of punishment for parents andteachers to use whey they are trying to teach children about good behavior is asubtle issue. But the function of punishment is undeniable. It is necessary topunish a child because of his or her wrong acting. I suggest to use criticizeor physical training, such as asking children to do cleaning, as punishment.To conclude, teaching children about rightand wrong should be waited until children become older. Accompanied by certainways of punishment, the teaching process would be more productive.。

2.剑10 test1 小作文什么意思

剑10test1小作文，家用能源和气体排放The above two charts depict the Austrilianhousehold energy use and the corresponding gas emissions of each type of energyuse.From the first pie chart we could see thatwater heating and heating are two major types of energy use, which occupies 30%and 42% of all the energy used in one household. Other appliances use 15% ofthe energy, and then refrigeration, lighting and cooling, which share the left13% of energy.Figures in the second chart are quitedifferent from that of the first chart. Heating, which consumes 42% of a household'senergy, only emits 15% of all the gas that one household produces. But the gasemission and energy use of water heating are pretty even, at around 30%. Costs only7% of all the energy, refrigeration produces 14% of all the gas, which goes forthe condition of other appliances and the figures are 15% and 28%, and for thecondition of lighting, 4% and 8%. Cooling consumes 2% of energy and contributesto 3% of gas emission.To sum up, water heating and heatingconsume 72% of energy and produces only 47% of gas. Refrigeration and otherappliances, though only use 22% of energy, emit 42% of gas.大作文， 教小孩是非观要不要从小时候就开始教， 要不要punishmentIndeed, children need to learn how to tellright from wrong as they grow into adults. But as far as I am concerned, it isbetter for us to teach this ability to them when they are older rather than atan early age. Moreover, certain punishments are required to make sure childrencould behave themselves.For starter, it would be easier for us toteach children about the difference between right and wrong when they becomeolder. Young children, due to their lack of life experience, have difficultiesin understanding moral lectures. However, after they grow up a little, theycould better digest the meaning of what is right and wrong based on their pastexperience, thus will grasp the notion of right and wrong more easily andthoroughly.Similarly, older children tend to know moreabout punishment, and will be able to learn from the punishment caused by theirfail to recognize the distinction between right and wrong. Punishment mighthave long-lasting influences on younger children for they are too fragile. Olderchildren, on the other hand, could handle punishment more with ease and couldfigure out the reason they got punished. Therefore, they could gain betterunderstanding about right and wrong than younger children do.The sort of punishment for parents andteachers to use whey they are trying to teach children about good behavior is asubtle issue. But the function of punishment is undeniable. It is necessary topunish a child because of his or her wrong acting. I suggest to use criticizeor physical training, such as asking children to do cleaning, as punishment.To conclude, teaching children about rightand wrong should be waited until children become older. Accompanied by certainways of punishment, the teaching process would be more productive.。

3.剑11中的作文范文怎么像中国人写的和评的

调皮的表妹作文 简介：我的表妹今年5岁了，她天真活泼，机灵顽皮，非常可爱.一天中午，我和表妹坐在床铺上玩耍.她歪着脑袋，右手拿根红色的小塑料管，眨巴着一双明亮的大眼睛，调皮地对我说：“姐姐，咱俩用这根管子吹气，比比谁的气力的大，好吗？” “好…

我的表妹今年5岁了，她天真活泼，机灵顽皮，非常可爱.

一天中午，我和表妹坐在床铺上玩耍.她歪着脑袋，右手拿根红色的小塑料管，眨巴着一双明亮的大眼睛，调皮地对我说：“姐姐，咱俩用这根管子吹气，比比谁的气力的大，好吗？”

“好，现在就吹！”话音刚落，俩就喊着细管的一头，吹起来.我使出最大的力气，却吹不过她.我偷偷地看了一眼，一瞧，只见他在暗笑，红红的嘴唇紧紧地抿着，想在说“哈哈，你吹不过我吧！你真是个大笨蛋”

难道表妹会有这么大的气力？我就不信我赢不了她小丫头！于是，我使劲儿地吹起来.我憋得脸红脖子粗，嘴巴都吹疼了，而表妹却冷不防地伸出小手，在我鼓得溜圆的腮帮上一捏，“噗哧”一声，笑了.这是，我忽然看见表妹那边管头上地有几个深深的牙印，这时，我才恍然大悟；她是把管子咬死了呀！我怎么能吹过她呢？

我吐掉管子，伸手嬉戏着打她，表妹一闪身，嗖的跳下床，撩起门帘，跑到屋子外面去了，“咚！”表妹正撞在了刚要出门买菜的阿姨身上.阿姨假装生气地说：“你怎么啦？到处乱撞！像个石头人一样重，要是个孩子儿，非让你这下压成肉饼不可？”

表妹笑得弯下了腰，用食指指着我，断断续续地说：“姐姐她.才是.‘石头人’呢！”说着，她跌跌撞撞地笑着地冲出了家门玩耍去了.

这我的表妹，她是那样地调皮，机灵，天真可爱.

4.求大牛雅思小作文批改

The graph describes the portion of the population above aged 65 between 1940 and 2040 in the three countries---USA,Sweden and Japan. As shown in the graph, it is expected to have increments in the rate of old people .

In 1940,the proportion of population above age 65 remained extremely low, as the figure of these countries stood at 9%(in USA),8%(in Sweden) and only 5%(in Japan). However by the end of the 1980 ,the number of old people in USA and Sweden had dramatically grown ,arriving at 15% and 14% respectively; by contrast, it had indicated a slight decrease in Japan ,then reminded approximate 3% in the corresponding period .Subsequently, fluctuation showed ,but had been predicted that the rate of the elder was going to descend around 10% in both USA and sweden.

After 1980, the number of Japanese old people had been consistently toward an upward trend .The portion of population above age 65 in Japan will overtake it of Sweden and USA in(around?) 2030. Clearly,the circumstances of USA,Sweden and Japen will reach the similar point.

5.【求求求求懂雅思的好心的老师帮我细批一下这篇小作文100分悬赏加

The table illustrates the figure on how much consumer spend on different aspects in five SEPARATED countries in 2002. The expenditure on food/drink/tobacco takes up 32.14% of total (expenditure) in TURKEY. But,while that makes up about 15.77%. As for the other four countries ,all of their figure IS between rough 30% to 15%. 9% of total expenditure is distributed into clothing/footwear in Italy . However, that OCCUPIES only 5.4% in Span. The figure for the rest three countries ,similarly,STANDS at around 6%. Turkish spend 4.35% of their total expenditure on leisure/education ,which is followed by that of Sweden (3.22%) , Italy(3.20%) and Ireland (2.21%). The figure for Span only REPRESENTS 1.98%此文已拜读，总体不错，细节略有不足.大写之处已经改过，仅供参考。

6.求助帮忙看看小作文 剑桥 7 text1 的 第一次写 请专业人士给个分数 和

第二段的第一句话要改：First,as we seen consumers of Ireland and Turkey spend most of their money on food.第二句把第二句中people前的the去掉、drinks or tobacco第一段的第一句话要修改：From the table below we can get the information that different country has different percentage of national consumer expenditure。

7.求大牛雅思小作文批改

The graph describes the portion of the population above aged 65 between 1940 and 2040 in the three countries---USA,Sweden and Japan.As shown in the graph,it is expected to have increments in the rate of old people .In 1940,the proportion of population above age 65 remained extremely low,as the figure of these countries stood at 9%(in USA),8%(in Sweden) and only 5%(in Japan).However by the end of the 1980 ,the number of old people in USA and Sweden had dramatically grown ,arriving at 15% and 14% respectively; by contrast,it had indicated a slight decrease in Japan ,then reminded approximate 3% in the corresponding period .Subsequently,fluctuation showed ,but had been predicted that the rate of the elder was going to descend around 10% in both USA and sweden.After 1980,the number of Japanese old people had been consistently toward an upward trend .The portion of population above age 65 in Japan will overtake it of Sweden and USA in(around?) 2030.Clearly,the circumstances of USA,Sweden and Japen will reach the similar point.。

8.剑桥雅思全真试题4 第一篇小作文范文

The table gives a breakdown of the different types of family who were living in poverty in Australia in 1999.

On average, 11% of all households, comprising almost two million people, were in this position. However, those consisting of only one parent or a single adult had almost double this proportion of poor people, with 21% and 19% respectively.

Couples generally tended to be better off, with lower poverty levels for couples without children (7%) than those with children (12%). It is noticeable that for both types of household with children, a higher than average proportion were living in poverty at this time.

older people were generally less likely to be poor, though once again the trend favoured elderly couples (only 4%) rather than single elderly people (6%).

Overall the table suggests that households of single asults and those with children were more likely to be living in poverty than those consisting of couples.

T0T是不是这个，，累死我了