朱宁老师雅思范文

一、谁有2019年2月14日雅思大作文真题参考范文

2019年2月14日雅思大作文题目新技术改变了孩子们的玩耍方式，这是好还是坏？New technologies have changed the way children spend their free time.Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages？解析&审题本题中有三个关键词，即new technologies,children,spend their free time，要求讨论“新技术改变了孩子们玩耍的方式，这是好还是坏？”在构思本题的时候，我们首先需要说清楚的是：哪些新技术？怎么样改变了孩子们玩耍的方式？然后讨论这种改变是好还是坏。

当然，我们也要提醒自己，本题的重点是讨论“这种改变是好还是坏？”说到“新技术”，我们立马会想到电脑，网络，智能手机。雅思考试写作经常要求考生讨论这样的题目“有了新技术，人们是否还需要去博物馆，去上学，去图书馆，去公司上班”，这是要求考生讨论新技术给人们的学习和生活带来的影响。

本题其实与这些题目是异曲同工的：有了新技术，孩子们怎么玩耍？那么，新技术如何改变孩子们玩耍的方式呢？我们需要提炼出2-3个“玩耍新方式”，在接下来重点讨论起优劣势的时候才能有基础。这里其实涉及到一个比较的问题。

没有新技术的时候，孩子们一般喜欢在一起做各种游戏，或者安静地阅读，而网络手机的广泛使用，则让孩子们整天独自打电子游戏，或者浏览各种社交媒体信息。于是，我们可以归纳出新技术给孩子玩耍方式造成的两个影响：（1）从真实的集体游戏转变为虚拟的网上游戏；（2）从阅读书籍到紧盯手机或电脑。

这样，我们接下来的讨论就相对容易了。我们可以讨论这种变化的消极影响：首先，紧盯手机和电脑会给孩子的身体带来不良影响（数据表明，中小学生近视的比例已经达到惊人的70%），其次，过多沉浸在虚拟世界容易让孩子们产生孤独感，失去解决真实世界中各种问题的能力（比如人际交往能力，领导能力等）。

这样写，大家是否觉得思路是很清晰的？接下来，请大家阅读唐老师的高分范文，看以上思路是如何具体反映到字里行间的。老师笔记01The widespread use of new technologies such as the Internet,computers,and smart phones has fundamentally changed the way children spend their free time.In the past,most children wouldengage in outdoor activities such as hiking,playing hide-and-seek,flying kites,to name only a few.Those who enjoyed reading for pleasure would stay indoors and read print books such as classical novels,children's stories,and comic books.The situation is quite different now.The great majority of children today spend their spare time online,playing video games,listening to music,and browsing around in the social media of all kinds.In my view,this new development has more downside risks.互联网、电脑和智能手机等新技术的广泛应用，从根本上改变了儿童利用空闲时间的方式。

在过去，大多数儿童都会从事户外活动，如远足，玩捉迷藏，放风筝，等等。那些喜欢读书的人会待在家里，读一些印刷书籍，如经典小说，儿童故事和漫画书。

现在情况完全不同了。今天，绝大多数孩子都把业余时间花在网上，玩电子游戏，听音乐，在各种社交媒体上闲逛。

在我看来，这一新趋势有更多不利的风险。解析（1）本段讨论新技术如何改变了儿童利用空闲时间的方式。

本段采用的是比较法：过去。

，而现在。

。（2）widespread广泛的（3）fundamentally从根本上地（4）engage in从事（5）to name only a few仅举几个例子；诸如此类；等等（6）the great majority of。

绝大多数的。

（7）browse around四处闲看（8）downside risks不利的风险02Though it does make children's life more interesting,and help them obtain information in a faster and more convenient way,the Internet also makes children easily addicted to it.The violent gun-fighting games,for example,appeal to children so much that some of them will spend hours and hours playing them.The cost is really high.The children's performance at school becomes worse and worse,and their health also suffers.A recent study indicates that globally,the Internet games are responsible for 70%middle school students who are shortsighted.虽然互联网确实使儿童的生活更有趣，并帮助他们以更快和更方便的方式获取信息，但互联网也使孩子们很容易对它上瘾。比如暴力枪战游戏对孩子们有很大的吸引力，以至于他们中的一些人会几个小时几个小时地玩这些游戏。

这样做的成本真的很高。孩子们在学校的表现越来越差，而且健康也受到损害。

最近的一项研究表明，在全球范围内，网络游戏造成70%的中学生近视。解析（1）本段论述把时间花在网络游戏上的第一种坏处：学习和身体受损。

论述方法包括举例和引用研究数据。（2）be addicted to。

沉迷于。

（3）appeal to。吸引（4）globally全球范围内（5）be responsible for。

为。

负责；导致。

03Worse still,too much time spent facing the computer or smart phone may result in children's isolation from the actual world.In the traditional games,children could learn 。

二、急~需要有人帮我写篇雅思口语的范文 Describe your ideal job 感激不尽

I am a college student now and the ideal job for me is a teacher.

For starters (pat推荐的开篇小词) ，I was told that being a teacher is one of the most worthy thing a person can be(teenage drama queen 里面的台词).Teachers fill young minds with knowledge, but more importantly, give those minds a compass so that knowledge doesn't go to waste（也是一个电影里面的台词，忘了电影名了，能搜到）.

Also, I'm crazy about kids. I'm pretty sure I will enjoy the time being with adorable children. I've pictured that moment in my dream many times.

As for the place I can be a teacher, I think schools would probably be the best. You know, most children study at schools. I will meet all kinds of lovely children there and it must be nice.（微笑一下，表情作高兴状）

I don't care how many hours I will be working every day. Being a teacher would give me a better appreciation of life. You know, life is not always about how much you can get or how much you have spent, the true genius of life is about pursuing what you like. In contrast, I don't think I would be delighted when I'm not what I wanna be, I don't wanna be a businessman or a lawyer or something, even if I could be well-paid.

Anyway, it's no exaggeration to say that teaching is the ideal job that I want to do later in my life.

你要是简单回答，在学校教书，每天工作八小时，就没话了。那样怎么凑时间呢？所以，就放开来扯一扯！！！这样时间就够了！而且也没有走题！（其实雅思口试关键也不是扣题，而是有话可说，说得好！）

考试放轻松一点不要紧张，说话表情自然点哈~

当时我准备雅思的理想工作的题材也是准备说老师的。原因：1.好说。2.咱了解啊。3.雅思考官都是至少5年的英语教师资历！你把老师这个职业夸夸（这个稿子也有夸）他们肯定高兴！

我雅思7~~以上基本也是从我准备雅思的材料中整合出来的，都算是有把握的语句~希望能帮到你

三、求雅思大作文范文参考

那题目的观点你是同意还是不同意先？我个人来讲是不同意的，现在娱乐比以前多了，只是方式不一样而已。

第一段，摆观点，不同意

第二段，不同意的原因123（娱乐只是为了放松，与creative无关，随着科技的发展，娱乐变得多样化，简单化和生活化，摆点实例支持观点，像online game, online chat, online reading，当然也有很多户外活动）

第三段，让步讨论对方观点，诚然科技发展也有其弊端，网络的发达使人宁可花更多时间在电脑面前而不是出去社交（科技发达的弊端有很多事例的，沉迷游戏不利于身心发展等等）

第四段，再次表达自己的观点是不同意的，虽然有弊端，但是当今人们娱乐的选择比以前多多了，大家有更多的选择适合自己的方式去娱乐，而市场的需求反而让新的娱乐more creative，所以说less creative 是不成立的。

第五段，总结

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五、【求一篇雅思作文范文或者思路.09.12.5日考的一篇Nowadays,

我是世纪雅思学生，我问我们老师，一下是我的老师给回答的：In present-day society,plastic containers and utensils are extensively used in big cities and the countryside alike.They are so common-place and I would hazard the guess that each one of us has seen,at one time or another,the unsightly scene of plastic bags swirling in the wind.These plastic shopping bags,chopsticks,to-go boxes and mineral-water bottles,to name but a few,when not properly disposed of,create a colossal amount of non-biodegradable refuse.Therefore,some people argue that we have embarked upon a “throw-away” era when plastic rubbish is largely dumped indiscriminately and irresponsibly (this act is often labeled “white pollution” on account of the color of plastic wastes).Personally,I wholeheartedly support their view.There are numerous reasons for this worrisome phenomenon coming into being.To begin with,at present the bulk of people who shop and/or eat out regularly are still poorly-informed,uninformed or misinformed about the pernicious influence that non-biodegradable pollutants exert on the ecosystem,which is the main culprit in the global-scale mishandling of the plastic wastes.The chief component of such trash is polythene,which cannot decompose on landfill sites over the process of the next hundreds of years if no major scientific breakthrough comes along in polythene treatment.Thus,such trash must be dealt with collectively rather than be scattered like tumbleweeds.Secondly,the proliferation of plastic shopping bags and eating ware is largely fuelled by the surging,headlong consumerism.Plastic containers and utensils are lighter in weight,cheaper (often free of charge) in price and water-proof in performance.These superior properties make them preferable to their paper and cloth counterparts in customers' eyes; and as consumer satisfaction reigns supreme in contemporary society,compared with superb portability,affordability and utility,how to dispose of them is the last thing the customers are concerned about.Additionally,plastic bags,wrap and containers are also commercially feasible since they are cheaper to manufacture,ship and store.These mercenary considerations also have prompted the good old cloth or paper bags to be supplanted by plastic bags but over the phasing-out process,few stores and restaurants advocate or encourage the use of environmentally-benign disposal of plastic trash,hence the whole slew of non-biodegradable garbage and environmental hazards ensue.Given the scale and severity of “white pollution”,we must take immediate steps to address this scourge.In the first place,we must do our utmost to enhance people's awareness of how persistent and devastating non-biodegradable trash can be to our environment and our posterity's.Secondly,retail stores and dining establishments should spare no effort in encouraging their customers to reuse plastic packing items.Furthermore,indiscriminate and irresponsible dumping of household garbage or personal junk should be outlawed by the legislature and heavy fines or even jail terms must be imposed on those compulsive litterbugs who fail to get their act together.Then,on the part of the biochemical researchers and technologists,scientific research must be launched here and now in pursuit of effectual ways to convert non-biodegradable refuse to biodegradable refuse.Last but not least,the government must not shirk its obligations in mobilizing scientific resources and rallying popular support in the crusade against “white pollution”.Neither should pay just lip service to relevant research and campaigns if no enough funding can be obtained otherwise.Additionally,I am convinced a customer tax levied by the government on the use of plastic bags will also help to curb this massive “white pollution”.The havoc non-biodegradable refuse can wreak on the ecosystem is beyond our imagination.It can eventually devastate soil,water and the aquatic and terrestrial biota.We must start combating this environmental catastrophe before the ecosystem irretrievably breaks down under the reign of the minute plastic debris.要是还有需要，请和我们世纪雅思的老师沟通吧~。