剑7test1part3口语范文

一、求剑七 Test3雅思口语Part3 题目一：Do you think it is a good thing to

1. 结构提示Under such condition, the children who get the prizes will…At the same time, the children who don't get them will…However, side effects may include…2. 要点提示Children--Who get the prizes: do better to keep the prize Who don't get the prizes: work hard to get it next timeSide effect。

二、跪谢

我也是挣扎中的烤鸭一员，只是说下我的见解，希望互相勉励吧

第一段改写得很好啊，我好喜欢

第二段感觉第一句不太对啊，图标给的是百分比而不是花销的量是吧。

Food/Drinks/Tobacoo group accounted for the largest part of（我想用in是不是好一点呢）the three sectors

还有在说到国家间差异的时候，我不太清楚你是在跟其他国家间对比呢，还是说是国家内部这个数据的对比呢。读起来有点迷糊。.

还有.. 你很久都没有处理你的问题啦，你现在已经考了么？

三、剑7 test1 小作文求修改

The graphic information in the table shows how the consumers spend their money between different items, in the following five countries by 2002: Ireland, Italy, Spain, Sweden and Turkey.

According to the table, most of the people in Ireland and Turkey were more likely to spend their money on food, drinks and tobacco. For Ireland and Turkey, the percentage of the money spend were 28.91% and 32.14%, but the other three countries in comparison had a percentage that was relatively low, which was at an average of 17% or so. However, the consumer expenditure for clothing and footwear in Italy were the highest, which was around 9.00%. Still, there's no doubt that Spain was the country with the lowest percentage for national consumer expenditure of leisure and education that was only 1.98%; while Turkey, was more than twice of what Spain had. Yet, the cost for leisure and education in Ireland, Italy and Sweden, according to the data, were at 2.21%, 3.2% and 3.22%.

In conclusion, consumers in Turkey were preferred to pour their money into both Food/Drinks/Tobacco and Leisure/Education, as against the highest consumer expenditure in other Europe countries was Food/Drinks/Tobacco.

大多数的用词方法改了一下，顺序也稍微换了一下，这样读起来比较顺口，还有你那个Food/Drinks/Tobacco和Leisure/Education，在这边基本上是不用“/”来划分的，就直接用逗号，而且也不要大写。

你最后一段我没看懂你想说什么，所以就没改了，。

四、剑7 test1 小作文求修改

The graphic information in the table shows how the consumers spend their money between different items in the following five countries, Ireland, Italy, Spain, Sweden and Turkey, by 2002.Consistent with the figures in the table, most of people in Ireland and Turkey are more likely to spend their money on Food/Drinks/Tobacco, with 28.91% in Ireland and 32.14% in Turkey, and the other three countries listed here are relatively low, averaging of 17% or so. However, the percentage of consumer expenditure for Clothing/footwear in the five countries was roughly stood on the same level, apart from Italy, which occupies as highly as 9.00%. Meanwhile, it is no doubt that Spain was the lowest country for national consumer expenditure of Leisure/Education, only 1.98%, while Turkey, according to the table, was more than twice that in Spain. Somewhat surprisingly however, the cost for Leisure/Education in Ireland, Italy and Sweden recorded here is 2.21%, 3.2% and 3.22% respectively.To sum up, consumers in Turkey were prefer to pour their money into both Food/Drinks/Tobacco and Leisure/Education, as against the highest consumer expenditure in other Europe countries was Food/Drinks/Tobacco.这一篇还可以展开。

五、剑桥雅思3 test1阅读答案

你好，很高兴为你解答：

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六、剑7雅思英语作文,高分求修改意见,不剩感激

请问下你这篇文章准备拿多少分，现在这个答案从任何角度来看都足够8分水平，应该已经足够了吧简单提些小意见，仅供参考，有些纯粹是个人说话习惯，人跟人也有分别，大可看看而已- - -优点1.辞藻丰富，用词准确2.开场白，两方论点，总结，条理清晰明了3.句法严禁，语法普遍准确缺点1.某些地方仍然有中式思维的残留，只挑一个例子来说We, human beings, have mercy on these kinds of crimes and everyone could understand and allow certain variations existing. allow certain variations existing明显是“允许一些变通存在”的直翻，（个人认为）更通顺的写法应为We, human beings, SHOULD have mercy on these kinds of crimes. We SHOULD show our understanding(s) and allow the existence(s) of certain variations.2.语法错误The ultimate objective that making the society better off as a whole, should be reminded all the time. The ultimate objective that makes (aims to make) the society better as a whole, should be reminded at all time.better of个人觉得不应该用在这种语境里吧，只是个感觉，请查有关文章对比用法3.显示出一些小小的文章个性遵守文章结构当然会为考官带来不少的方便，但以你的水平来看，足以在此基础上显示一些个人的才华，你的能力应该绰绰有余，充分的表现下自己么，呵呵开场白，放松一些，不需要完全转换原题，显得会有些生硬，自然点就好两方论点比重，既然反方有两个例子，正方（fairness方）不能什么都没有。

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