一、英语批改网作文598154的例文

Last sunday. I and my father, mother, grandparents, brother went to niushoushan

by bus. In the morning we came down the mountain. I saw wooded mountains, wild flowers bloom. We climb up the hill along the mountain path. Come halfway up the mountain, I feel a little tired,it began to rain,My West Lake silk umbrella missed,. Dad said to me,“Jill, don't do anything halfway.”at last,So I insisted reached the top, the top of the scenery so beautiful.We were flying kites, ate cold rice noodles .finally we went home.finally,Since then, I've kept the umbrella。i was very happy

二、英语批改网作文867919陈程辉的范文

他，是一个“臭名远扬”的“惹事鬼”和一个“烦人鬼”、插嘴“大王”，今天，就让我说说他的事例吧！这天，我们正在开心的上着体育课，我们有的正在跳短绳，有的正在踢毽子，有的正在跳长绳，都在聚精会神的干着自己的事，就只有他是个例外，一会儿去跟跳短绳的捣个乱，比如有人正在比赛，就把一个人的绳子抢过来之类的。

过了一会儿，他又去找长绳队的麻烦了，瞧，他做了一个起跑的动作，便跑过去趁下一个人还没有跳，便跳也没跳直接跑了过去，把即将要跳的俞小森吓了一跳，差一点直接坐在地上，又过了一会儿，他又来了，瞧，他又做了一个起跑的动作，便跑过去趁下一个人还没有跳，便跳也没跳直接跑了过去，又把即将要跳的季小衡吓得直接摔倒，毕竟她是女生呀，俞小森好歹也是男生。这一摔可好，季小衡本来就是爱哭的女生，这一摔估计把季小衡的脚给扭到了。

这下他可完蛋了，季小衡哇哇大哭了起来。季小衡一哭，他就被女生的”白眼”围攻，接着惊动了体育老师，体育老师把他“拎”起来狠狠地训了一顿。

下课后，又不知道被喜欢打小报告的人告到了吴老师（班主任）那儿。刚刚被体育老师训了一顿的他，又被“抓”到了吴老师办公室狠狠地训了一顿。

可是他前脚从办公室刚刚出来，后脚就又去搞乱了。还有一次，我们上篮球课，我们都在兴致冲冲的完成老师给的指标。

就只有他在捣乱，这次，他看见了一个空了的篮球，往高小玉那儿扔，还好高小玉躲得快，没有砸到眼睛只是擦过眼睛。高小玉当场哭了。

体育老师一看是他，叹了一口气，“踹”了一下他训也不训了，直接让他去罚站去了。又不知道被哪个喜欢打小报告的人告到了吴老师（班主任）那儿。

刚刚被体育老师罚站了一顿的他，又被“抓”到了吴老师办公室狠狠地罚站了一顿。可是前脚从办公室刚刚出来，后脚就又去搞乱了。

三、批改网作文号827699的答案

我有一位母亲，比母亲更伟大，那就是我的祖国——中国。

在祖国这一片辽阔的沃土上，有着丰富的物产和无穷的宝藏。在宇宙无垠的岁月里，它抚育了常青的江水，常碧的群山，滔滔不绝的长江黄河，，那号称“世界屋脊”的青藏高原，有两个世界之最，一个是世界最高的山峰——珠穆朗玛峰，一个是世界最深最长的河流峡谷——雅鲁藏布大峡谷。

更加值得我们骄傲自豪的是祖国也培育出千千万万属于自己的孩子，他们有一个共同的名字，叫中国人。他们有许多共同的特点：崇尚自由、爱好和平、追求真理、勤俭而乐观。

他们身上处处充满了绚丽的色彩。 长江后浪推前浪，无数先烈前仆后继，2008年的5.12四川特大地震为坚强的中国人民谱写了一首震惊中外的悲壮而又豪迈的诗歌。

为了多救出几个学生把青春锁定在26岁的青春年华的。..。

四、批改网作文414142

母爱是一根棒棒糖，让你在甜蜜中感受到快乐；母爱是一本厚厚的书，让你懂得许许多多的人生道理.母爱是一把钥匙，在你遇到困难时帮助你解决；母爱是一片海洋，滋润着你的心灵快乐成长.下面就有两件事情，给我留下了深刻的印象.记得二年级的时候，因为我的阅读理解非常薄弱，做得既慢又差，一篇里要错好几道题.妈妈看在眼里急在心里.为了提高我的阅读水平，妈妈让我每天晚上做一篇阅读理解，不会的妈妈会耐心地一一讲解.我觉得妈妈每天上班非常辛苦，晚上回家还要帮我辅导作业.我心想，“我一定要认真地做好每天的作业，努力掌握各种知识，将来做个对社会有用的人.”经过妈妈一天一天的指导，我懂得了每篇文章的主要内容.慢慢地，我还可以独自做阅读理解，基本做到不错，而且通过阅读还懂得了很多的道理.这对我的作文帮助也非常大.妈妈不但关心我的学习，还关心我的健康.记得四年级的时候，我的眼睛得了结膜炎，每天都很痒.妈妈告诉我，写作业和看书一小时后，要做眼保健操，还要看看外面的绿色风景.如果感到眼睛不舒服，要滴眼药水或把眼睛闭起来.我每天都按照妈妈说的那样做，慢慢地眼睛里的炎症没有了，而且眼睛越来越漂亮了.在我眼里，母爱如一棵大树，那么无私，那么伟大；母爱如一滴滴春雨，滋润我的心田，奉献出一丝丝温暖。

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五、求改作文,在批改网上总是81分

People always look forward to their leisure time. However, when they do have some, they sometimes complain about it. Why? Because they have no idea what to do or what they have done at their leisure time, they feel confused and even guilty of a waste of time. In my opinion, the deeper reason is that they haven't made a plan at the outset. On the one hand, if you don't plan you (your) leisure time, you may perceive that time passes quickly like a white pony's shadow across a crevice, but you cannot figure out what you have done. It seems that you haven't done anything, but time has passed by. For example, when I was in junior high（加school）, I never had any plans for my weekends. Therefore, I woke up at （改为on）Saturday morning and thought I had nothing to do, then I just did the first thing occurred （改为 to occur）to my head. Though I was relaxed, I was also a little confused at the same time. When my friends talked about their wonderful time on weekends with me, I just listened. Because（改为 ，because ） I was not clear what exactly I did at my weekends at all. In the case that （去掉that）we can use colors to describe weekends, I can still tell you what color is my friends' weekends. Ann' weekend was always pink because she knit; Peter's was green because he mowed lawn for his family and neighbors in order to earn pocket money; Kate's was warm yellow because she looked after her little twin sisters and learned how to bake. They knew what they did in that( in that 改为if ) they made plans at the beginning of the school year, which Ann once told me about. What color was my weekend? I didn't know. And it is （去掉it is） that I did not have any plans for weekends result (resulted)in the differences. On the other hand, if you plan your leisure time, you will find that you(your) dreams are going to come true. Have you ever dreamed of traveling, reading, listening to the good music, learning foreign language and so on? You know that you can do these meaningful things to improve yourself, but you simply have no time. Wake up! It is the （去掉the）time to abandon illusion of no time and( to) begin to plan your leisure time. Is playing ping-pang your dream? You can put learning ping-pang on your schedule on weekend. Is hiking what you always tend( to )? You can make a plan and go out with friends at weekends. Have you dreamed of playing for a band? Doing it on( in ) your summer holiday could be a good plan. If you plan your leisure time, you will find out you have spent loads of time to do(to do 改为doing) useful and meaningful things. As a result, your leisure time become (becomes )wonderful and you turn to be extremely clear what to do, and what you have done. Let us have a conclusion: why not plan your leisure time? You would learn a lot ( and )even achieve a lot.。

六、批改网编号999394的作文怎么写

文无定法亦有法。我们说：“ 尽信书不如无书”，用死板教条的方法写作文必然不能实现真正的进步。世间万物都是一个：“易穷则变，变则通，通则久”的过程，作文也不列外。大量实践证明，优秀作文总是有那么几个共同点，或是立意独特，或是选材精当，或是文采斐然。掌握这些要点，对帮助我们的作文取得好成绩，无疑是有大裨益的。无论是大到构思谋篇，还是细化到语言文字，都给粗了一定规则与法度，有了这些指导，同学们就会少走弯路.

读是吸纳，写是输出。如同书法要先临贴，学绘画需要写生一样，学习作文也应从“模仿入手”，熟读唐诗三百首，不会作诗也会唱。高品质的精品文章始终是一本作文书最关键的组成部分，将这些精品有效吸收，并内化成为自己的东西，作文高。作文高人一等不再是梦！

没有争论，没有讨论，就不会有进步。同一篇文章，不同的人看了就会有不同的想法，我们一定要有海纳百川的气量，积极听取不同的意见，在质疑中反思，在反思中成长，而切勿孤芳自赏。

谁不希望自己的作文能吸引人！说实话，如果你的作文吸引人了，那么你的作文就非常成功了。也就是说，要达到“吸引力”的效果，那可是写作文的最大问题，这是一个需要不断思考和重视的问题。无论你多么会写作，哪怕你已经成了一个大作家，这个问题还是一个问题。这里，我想说一点，那就是要想吸引别人，首先得吸引自己，感动自己，让自己觉得特别有趣。如果你说的话，你写的人，叙述的事，你自己都不感觉新鲜，我想你的作文是不可能吸引人的。

祝每位同学都能写出一纸好作文！

七、英语作文批改网616238

i think good hibits are very important to us. first of all, keeping healthy is necessary. breakfast can give our body the power we need during the day, so we must eat it on time. to eat enough fruits and vegetables is better than eating the junk food. don't forget to wash hands before meals. and then, we should go to bed and get up early, as everyone knows, staying up is very bad for our healthy. finally, do more exercise. good haibits can keep us a happy life。

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八、英语作文批改网707854

In Chinese tradition, people believe that the more children, the better, because having more children means owning the luck, so people had a big family at that time. But the big popularity brings a lot of pressure for our land, what's more, we were poor, so in order to control the popularity, the government carried out the policy of One-child family plan. Now many years have passed, our economy develops so fast, people live the better life. The one-child family plan indeed brings people many advantages, the parents can raise their children in the better way, they can send their children to the school, thus to receive good education. At the same time, the parents can have less pressure and have more time to enjoy life. Though the plan has its bad sides, but in all, the good sides surpass the negative effect.。