一、求大神改一改我的雅思作文,剑桥7t1的小作文

This table illustrates the [data](normally we say illustrate the changes or the situation, or show you the data )of consumers spending on various items in [the following five countries, ](omit them!)Ireland, Italy,Spain, Sweden and Turkey in 2002.According to the table, it's obvious that Irelandand and(!)Turkey spent(I'd rather use account for) the [most](highest) percentage of money, [while](with) 28.91% for Ireland and 32.14% for Turkey, on food, drinks and tobacco. The other 3 countries had [similar](nearly even. Here similar will raise confusion.) percentage at an average of nearly 17%, which is far lower than (that of) the previous countries. Then in the item of clothing and footwear Italy stood out with a 9%and the rest of the countries range from 5% to 7%. [Different from](in contrast with) the former 2items, [countries](the countries') spending didn't vary too much from each other in the item of leisure and education. Italy went to 4.35% and Spain sit at 1.98%.[Every country has its unique way of life](It's the people not the country that have their way of life. I'd rather say People in different countries have different life styles.). We can judge them only through consumers spending[, but](.But) it may be better if [we](they) spend more money on education and leisure.注：中括号里的内容是觉得有问题的部分，之后括号内的内容是给出的替换.时间关系只能说这么多了，希望能帮到你.。

二、剑桥雅思全真试题4 第一篇小作文范文

The table gives a breakdown of the different types of family who were living in poverty in Australia in 1999.

On average, 11% of all households, comprising almost two million people, were in this position. However, those consisting of only one parent or a single adult had almost double this proportion of poor people, with 21% and 19% respectively.

Couples generally tended to be better off, with lower poverty levels for couples without children (7%) than those with children (12%). It is noticeable that for both types of household with children, a higher than average proportion were living in poverty at this time.

older people were generally less likely to be poor, though once again the trend favoured elderly couples (only 4%) rather than single elderly people (6%).

Overall the table suggests that households of single asults and those with children were more likely to be living in poverty than those consisting of couples.

T0T是不是这个，，累死我了

三、我与剑桥共成长一千字作文大全

今年十月一日，我突然对弹钢琴感兴趣了，我问妈妈：“我哥哥和妹妹都学钢琴，你们为什么没让我学呢？”妈妈说：“你小的时候，我们问过你几次，要不要学钢琴，你都回答不想学的。”我说：“那你们为什么不逼着我学呢？真可惜耽误了这么多年！”妈妈笑了，说：“你不喜欢的东西，我们是不会逼着你学的，你想想，我们什么时候强迫过你学东西？你的课外班都是怎么去上的？”我现在的课外班只有一个英语班，我是怎么上的这个班呢……

我从去年一年级开始，就很喜欢英语，课本上的每一课我都学得津津有味，我特别特别想再多学点英语。奶奶就带我去诺亚的剑桥预备级试听，我一听马上就喜欢了，Tracy老师课讲得生动有趣，课堂中还可以做游戏，而且，我有两个同班同学也在这里上；当时，预备级已经上了四节课，我从第五节课学，也能跟得上。就这样，我学完预备级接着现在学剑桥一

四、求雅思大神帮忙解惑一下吧

1. yr olds就是year olds的简写，不过考官范文里这么写你可千万别学，自己擅自用的话很可能驾驭不好，在雅思作文里面要尽量避免所有简写，例如不要写can't，而是写cannot。

2. only 40% of 40-49 yr olds and 18% of over yr olds are studying for career reasons in late adulthood.

这句话里面的studying就是现在进行时，表示现在正在发生的动作，因为题目描述里面是正在发生的事，所以就可以用进行时了。

3. There are only 10% of under 26yr olds studying out of interest.

这句话里的studying，是因为studying out of interest是一个修饰语，在修饰26岁以下10%的人，句子翻译成：26岁以下的人只有10%是出于兴趣去学习的。注意之所以用studying。这样的一个verb modifier，而不是用定语从句，是因为studying。修饰的10%，而并不是26yr olds，如果写成There are only 10% of under 26yr olds who study out of interest，句子的翻译就变成了：26岁以下、出于兴趣学习的人里面，这儿只有10%。

4. However 70% of over 49yr olds study for interest in comparison to 18% studying for career reasons.

第一个study用原型，是主句里的谓语动词，第二个studying的原因去上句话一样，是studying for career reasons在修饰18%.