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新SAT写作中怎样指出Evidence并深度分析

Analysis in scoring rubrics新的写作评分标准主要包括reading, analysis，和writing，其中的analysis对大家来讲应该是比较新颖的部分。

在满分的评分标准中，明确要求一篇好的文章应该能够“offers a thorough,well-considered evaluation of the author's use of evidence, reasoning, and /or stylistic and persuasive elements, and/or features(s) of the student's own choosing”. 换句话说，考生需要去分析作者怎样应用证据，说理或其他有说服力的风格要素来证明自己的观点。Evidence in reading passage在仔细分析官方指南和CB公布的样题后（ “Seasons of Life and Land”, “Beyond Vietnam”, “The Digital Parent Trap”, “Let There Be Dark”, “Why Literature Matters”, “Foreign News at a Crisis Point”, “Bag Ban Bad for Freedom and Environment”），我们发现其中除了两篇演讲 “Seasons of Life and Land”, “Beyond Vietnam”，其他5篇都包含了大量的evidence，也就是说，evidence构成了作者行文的主要内容。

In what forms？首先我们来看一下，什么样的内容叫做evidence。在官方指南的第178页是这样描述的，“Evidence is information and ideas that the author uses to support a claim. Evidence takes many forms， … Evidence can come in the form of facts, statistics, quotations from(other) experts, the results of experiments or other research, examples, and the like…” 从这里我们不难发现evidence可能出现的形式是事实，数据，引用别人的话，实验或研究的结果，具体的例子等。

例如：How to meet the demands？考生在阅读文章中，看到这些相关的内容时，如数字，for example，引用一些专家的话等，就需要在写作时仔细地分析作者是怎样用这些数据去构建文章的争论的。Evidence在写作时改如何处理呢，首先要identify 它出现的位置，然后能够去解释说明在这里出现怎样才能证明文章的主干内容，这个是analysis得分非常关键的一点。

从官方指南中给出的几篇范文，我们发现对于analysis部分的评分规律基本如下：1分：没有指出evidence（或reason/stylistic）出现的位置；2分：指出evidence（或reason/stylistic）出现的位置，但是没有分析作用；3分：指出evidence（或reason/stylistic）出现的位置，分析对于文章主干的作用；4分：指出evidence（或reason/stylistic）出现的位置，深度分析其作用。更多的考生可能会关注，怎样算做深度分析。

考生可以参考官方指南212页的3/3/4分范文的第二段和214页的4/4/4分范文的第二段。“The author's statistics cited throughout the article reinforce his argument and provide a solid base. In the fourth paragraph he mentions the most common plastic grocery bags, which “make up just 0.3 percent of solid municipal waste materials. The author also cites the “77 percent increase in the sale of plastic trash can liner bags” as a result of a similar ban in Ireland. These statistics appeal to the readers logic and ensure that they can follow a logical path to support the author and oppose the ban. The statistics provide solid evidence that are enhanced by the numbers and cannot be easily argued against.” 3/3/4“Plastic bags 。

make up only about 1.6 percent of all municipal solid waste materials,” Summers ventures, his first utilization of a cold, hard fact. The truth in the numbers is undeniable, and he cites his sources promptly, making the statement that much more authentic. Knowledge is often viewed as power, and with information as direct as a statistic, Summers is handing that power to the reader - the power to agree with him. Not only does Summers spread the facts with numbers, he also does so with trends. He talks about the price increase in Ireland, and the documented health hazards of reusable bags. He uses the truth, backed by reliable sources, to infiltrate the readers' independent mind. His thoroughness in this regard carefully builds his argument against this piece of legislation, and this is just one of the many ways he spreads his opposition” 4/4/4不难发现，这两个段落主要的内容基本一致，但明显第二篇范文在evidence的引用和解析方面要更加深刻些，本篇作文的考生用了“Summer is handling that power to the reader- the power to agree with him…”， “he uses the truth, backed by reliable sources, to infiltrate the readers' independent mind.”。相比之下第一篇文章对于evidence的论述明显浅显很多，考生只是引用，没有深入分析对于作者构建argument的作用。

总而言之，在新SAT写作部分，考生在分析文章内容时，需要能够迅速辨认出明确的论证方法，其中evidence最为明显。在文章中一定要identify 文章中evidence等论证出现的位置，然后深刻分析这些evidence是怎样佐证作者的观点的。

新SAT写作中怎样指出Evidence并深度分析

Analysis in scoring rubrics 新的写作评分标准主要包括reading, analysis，和writing，其中的analysis对大家来讲应该是比较新颖的部分。

在满分的评分标准中，明确要求一篇好的文章应该能够“offers a thorough,well-considered evaluation of the author's use of evidence, reasoning, and /or stylistic and persuasive elements, and/or features(s) of the student's own choosing”. 换句话说，考生需要去分析作者怎样应用证据，说理或其他有说服力的风格要素来证明自己的观点。 Evidence in reading passage 在仔细分析官方指南和CB公布的样题后（ “Seasons of Life and Land”, “Beyond Vietnam”, “The Digital Parent Trap”, “Let There Be Dark”, “Why Literature Matters”, “Foreign News at a Crisis Point”, “Bag Ban Bad for Freedom and Environment”），我们发现其中除了两篇演讲 “Seasons of Life and Land”, “Beyond Vietnam”，其他5篇都包含了大量的evidence，也就是说，evidence构成了作者行文的主要内容。

例如： How to meet the demands？考生在阅读文章中，看到这些相关的内容时，如数字，for example，引用一些专家的话等，就需要在写作时仔细地分析作者是怎样用这些数据去构建文章的争论的。 Evidence在写作时改如何处理呢，首先要identify 它出现的位置，然后能够去解释说明在这里出现怎样才能证明文章的主干内容，这个是analysis得分非常关键的一点。

从官方指南中给出的几篇范文，我们发现对于analysis部分的评分规律基本如下： 1分：没有指出evidence（或reason/stylistic）出现的位置； 2分：指出evidence（或reason/stylistic）出现的位置，但是没有分析作用； 3分：指出evidence（或reason/stylistic）出现的位置，分析对于文章主干的作用； 4分：指出evidence（或reason/stylistic）出现的位置，深度分析其作用。更多的考生可能会关注，怎样算做深度分析。

考生可以参考官方指南212页的3/3/4分范文的第二段和214页的4/4/4分范文的第二段。 “The author's statistics cited throughout the article reinforce his argument and provide a solid base. In the fourth paragraph he mentions the most common plastic grocery bags, which “make up just 0.3 percent of solid municipal waste materials. The author also cites the “77 percent increase in the sale of plastic trash can liner bags” as a result of a similar ban in Ireland. These statistics appeal to the readers logic and ensure that they can follow a logical path to support the author and oppose the ban. The statistics provide solid evidence that are enhanced by the numbers and cannot be easily argued against.” 3/3/4 “Plastic bags 。

make up only about 1.6 percent of all municipal solid waste materials,” Summers ventures, his first utilization of a cold, hard fact. The truth in the numbers is undeniable, and he cites his sources promptly, making the statement that much more authentic. Knowledge is often viewed as power, and with information as direct as a statistic, Summers is handing that power to the reader - the power to agree with him. Not only does Summers spread the facts with numbers, he also does so with trends. He talks about the price increase in Ireland, and the documented health hazards of reusable bags. He uses the truth, backed by reliable sources, to infiltrate the readers' independent mind. His thoroughness in this regard carefully builds his argument against this piece of legislation, and this is just one of the many ways he spreads his opposition” 4/4/4 不难发现，这两个段落主要的内容基本一致，但明显第二篇范文在evidence的引用和解析方面要更加深刻些，本篇作文的考生用了“Summer is handling that power to the reader- the power to agree with him…”， “he uses the truth, backed by reliable sources, to infiltrate the readers' independent mind.”。相比之下第一篇文章对于evidence的论述明显浅显很多，考生只是引用，没有深入分析对于作者构建argument的作用。

有关2017天津全运会英语作文

There are many kinds of sports that I enjoy, such as swimming, basketball,travelling and so on. However, my favorite sport is running.In my mind,it is a good activities for people to keep healthy and relieve the pressure. After busy studying,i usually run on the playground,and i think that's the most wonderful time in a day.I love this sport since i'm 4,but at that time i only run for fun without any purpose.It's different now.Running has become a essential part in my life.I love running,and i 'll keep running.。

一篇英语作文

我这里有几篇，你自己选吧~ （1）Unforgettable travel Last winter, I and father and mother went to Virginia together the friend family crossed the Christmas day. We embark that morning, the weather was not very good, also cloudy was also cold, but was also having the light rain. We are driving the automobile continuously toward the north. In a while, on vehicle's rain water has formed the light ice. To the noon, the space started to snow, under Vietnam is bigger, the road surface is getting more and more slippery. Front the rain wash must not stop hits can see clearly the road. Afterward, in the window ice were getting more and more, the rain wash could also not help. We have often to stop the vehicle to come the ice to knock off the window, continues to start off again. To afternoon 45 o'clock, we have transferred the small mountain road by the highway, the snow have not stopped in next. We have lived south US's Atlanta, there the winter very little ices up and snows, therefore daddy is not familiar with on the ice drives. The vehicle starts specially slowly, daddy also appears very anxious. Although daddy especially careful, but in a curve's place beyond control, the automobile slides to other parallel traffic lane, because the following vehicle could not stop down has run upon our vehicle. We stop the vehicle to police and so on roadside. The day already completely was by now black. Police tell us, the front mountain road is more difficult start, therefore we discussed that looks for an inn to live first down. Had front the vehicle out of control experience, daddy vehicle has opened slowly. On the road all vehicles start look like the turtle to crawl. A mountain road piece of darkness, also cannot see the roadside the house, could find the inn to where? Without the means that can only continue to proceed to go slowly with trepidation. Past 10:00 pm, we arrived at the friend family finally. Our automobile besides the wheel, has wrapped a thick ice completely. Daddy said that later did not think again the snowing day drove travels. This is an unforgettable travel, but also hoped that later do not have the second time again. (2)I just came back from Guangxi province on July 20, 2007. I went there for work about a month. It is a real beautiful place. There are so many hills and clean rivers and kind people there. It is my first time that I went there where so many high and steep hills around. I had seen many colorful butterflies and heard sweet birdcall and breath fresh air, all of these could not be found in big cities. In there, most of local persons are very hot for our coming. They feasted us with local fish and chick and so on. All of foods are green and no fertilizer. So we still feel warm and happy though our task of work is heavy there. When chatting with local persons, I could feel their kindness and simple. Because of wicked traffic condition, many of them go out lesser, even few of them never go out. They are very curious for outer world. But they love their hometown very much and do not want to leave here. I was surprised that under the same sky we have so different life and thinking. But life is a kind of feeling, if you feel happy, then your life is ok for yourself. The last days of living there, I sometime missed home and my lover and my friends. I was unaccustomed to the fewer people and so quiet life there. The same with them, after all,there is not my home. I list some beautiful photos in below, I hope you can like them. I am glad to share happiness with you. (3)An Unforgettable Travel I have been to Xingjiang once. It's so beautiful a place that once you get there, you will never forget the beguiling scenery. Xingjiang is the biggest province in China, which ocuppies one sixths of China's land. I, together with my dad and mom, visited many famous tourist attractions, got to many view spots and took so many photos which are treasury to me. I kept those photos with romantic memories not only as real things in living, but also deep in my heart. That journey is ever so unforgetable. I also saw the troops saying there for protecting our country. And I'm of course proud of that. (3)An Unforgettable Travel My families plan to visit the interesting place p of Shanghai.We are led to the Oriental Pearl TV Tower ,a famous tourist attraction,which is on every Shanghainese's lips.It is a magnificent building located in Pudong New Area,it is the tallest building,so it's very easy to see this building,even if you are several miles away it.As we get to the high floor of the Oriental Pearl TV Tower,we see the attractive viwswhich includes the Huangpu River through the window.At the moment,l suddenly moved by the builders put their soul and energy to 。

1500字英语影评

阿甘正传（forrest gump） Robert Zemeckis (of Back to the Future fame) has collected another feather for his cap with his direction of this movie starring Tom Hanks as this childishly naive idiot savant. Though that description of Forrest Gump might be inadequate. Gump, gifted with a low IQ which lets him be adorably childlike even as he grows up, leads a very charmed life: a mother who loves him immensely and who sleeps with the school principal in order to make sure her child has the best education, a miraculous incident that eliminates the need for him to have braces for his legs, a childhood girlfriend who remains faithful to him till the end, surviving Vietnam with a medal, and, in general, a propensity for turning everything that happens to him into good. I wonder what the movie is trying to say. From one perspective, it implies that intelligence (as measured by IQs and the general idea of what "smart" is) is a very unnecessary trait. But I think one can look beyond that and say that childlike innocence, which can be considered stupid, has its rewards. Throughout the movie, Gump is in situations where he is harassed by other people but he never takes offense (except, of course, when his girl Jenny is being abused) at any of the insults thrown at him. He is indeed not completely stupid, even though he is portrayed as such, since he can re-assemble guns at high speed, run like crazy, play ping-pong like a maniac, and so on. The fact that Gump doesn't take offense, I think, is what keeps him content. He becomes a millionaire, but gives most of the money away. He is honest and open and this, along with his Alabama accent, endears him to the audience. But this gets tiresome after a while (especially after 2 hours). I thought the movie was overly long, but that's the only negative thing I have to say. Gump rubs elbows with many famous personalities over the last half of the century including Elvis Presley and Nixon, thanks to computer technology (General Dan doesn't really lose his legs either---they are just erased and the background is then touched up by using computer graphics programs). The account of how Gump is responsible for the gyrations that is so characteristic of Presley is very telling of the motives of this movie. Gump is contrasted to the famous males, who are idols (in some cases) in today's society, and it appears as though he is better off in comparison: Gump's choices in life seem to determine his niceness (he goes to Vietnam, keeps his promises ("a promise is a promise"), harbours no ill-feelings or grudges, and is not greedy with fame or money) and successes. Contrast this to the choices his lifetime girl friend Jenny makes: she wants to be famous and rich, but ends up being a druggie. The people she is surrounded by are all of a dubious nature: a sexually-abusive father, a show audience more interested in her naked body than her folk-music playing, and an abusive hippie-boyfriend. The traditional male heroes that we have had are all dysfunctional in some respect or another and we are lost without heroes, as Bloom points out. Gump is a new kind of a role-model; he's A Nice Boy and everyone knows they're hard to find. As one reviewer said: "Today the last American hero is a Tom Hanks character with a small IQ". Forrest Gump is the runaway hit movie of this summer. Many people claim it gets them in touch with their "inner child". Some reviewers attack it for the view that low IQ is a necessity for maintaining the child-like attitude Gump has. Gump never grows up or matures in the movie. He never becomes a man and remains a boy throughout. It is implied, at least, that his "stupidity" is what allows him to do this. This may or may not be true, but it is just a movie in the end. Most people in his position would not be so fortunate as he. And what about the converse: if you are intelligent, does this mean you cannot be child-like forever? That's not true, and I think Zemeckis did a good job in showing that anyone can retain their inner child as long they never grow up or become mature. There's room for much analysis here, but the plot isn't new. Peter Sellers did this a long time ago. "I'm tired now. I think I'm going home." --Forrest Gump "Life is like a box of chocolates; you never know what you're going to get." --Forrest Gump "Stupid is as stupid does." --Forrest Gump "I guess sometimes there just aren't enough rocks." --Forrest Gump。

关于《阿甘正传》的论文

Robert Zemeckis (of Back to the Future fame) has collected another feather for his cap with his direction of this movie starring Tom Hanks as this childishly naive idiot savant. Though that description of Forrest Gump might be inadequate. Gump, gifted with a low IQ which lets him be adorably childlike even as he grows up, leads a very charmed life: a mother who loves him immensely and who sleeps with the school principal in order to make sure her child has the best education, a miraculous incident that eliminates the need for him to have braces for his legs, a childhood girlfriend who remains faithful to him till the end, surviving Vietnam with a medal, and, in general, a propensity for turning everything that happens to him into good. I wonder what the movie is trying to say. From one perspective, it implies that intelligence (as measured by IQs and the general idea of what "smart" is) is a very unnecessary trait. But I think one can look beyond that and say that childlike innocence, which can be considered stupid, has its rewards. Throughout the movie, Gump is in situations where he is harassed by other people but he never takes offense (except, of course, when his girl Jenny is being abused) at any of the insults thrown at him. He is indeed not completely stupid, even though he is portrayed as such, since he can re-assemble guns at high speed, run like crazy, play ping-pong like a maniac, and so on. The fact that Gump doesn't take offense, I think, is what keeps him content. He becomes a millionaire, but gives most of the money away. He is honest and open and this, along with his Alabama accent, endears him to the audience. But this gets tiresome after a while (especially after 2 hours). I thought the movie was overly long, but that's the only negative thing I have to say. Gump rubs elbows with many famous personalities over the last half of the century including Elvis Presley and Nixon, thanks to computer technology (General Dan doesn't really lose his legs either---they are just erased and the background is then touched up by using computer graphics programs). The account of how Gump is responsible for the gyrations that is so characteristic of Presley is very telling of the motives of this movie. Gump is contrasted to the famous males, who are idols (in some cases) in today's society, and it appears as though he is better off in comparison: Gump's choices in life seem to determine his niceness (he goes to Vietnam, keeps his promises ("a promise is a promise"), harbours no ill-feelings or grudges, and is not greedy with fame or money) and successes. Contrast this to the choices his lifetime girl friend Jenny makes: she wants to be famous and rich, but ends up being a druggie. The people she is surrounded by are all of a dubious nature: a sexually-abusive father, a show audience more interested in her naked body than her folk-music playing, and an abusive hippie-boyfriend. The traditional male heroes that we have had are all dysfunctional in some respect or another and we are lost without heroes, as Bloom points out. Gump is a new kind of a role-model; he's A Nice Boy and everyone knows they're hard to find. As one reviewer said: "Today the last American hero is a Tom Hanks character with a small IQ". Forrest Gump is the runaway hit movie of this summer. Many people claim it gets them in touch with their "inner child". Some reviewers attack it for the view that low IQ is a necessity for maintaining the child-like attitude Gump has. Gump never grows up or matures in the movie. He never becomes a man and remains a boy throughout. It is implied, at least, that his "stupidity" is what allows him to do this. This may or may not be true, but it is just a movie in the end. Most people in his position would not be so fortunate as he. And what about the converse: if you are intelligent, does this mean you cannot be child-like forever? That's not true, and I think Zemeckis did a good job in showing that anyone can retain their inner child as long they never grow up or become mature.。

一篇有关英语电影的影评

My view of“the day after tomorrow”

This is my second time to see “the day after tomorrow”. The first time, and many others, I see the contradiction between human and nature, environmental pollution, energy deficiency. How stupid human are, and human is so small in the disaster. Then, I think more about how to protect the environment and save energy to avoid this situation happens.

But this time, I didn't see the film from environment, but from the human. I saw people's affection, friendship and love in the face of death, serious work and dedication, and some people is fatuous and ignorant in the face of scientific.

The time, I really feel what is responsibility, what is persist, what is commitment. In many cases, we do not need to go to the principle of the so-called persistent on the way of things. Some critical moment, we have to give up some minor things, only know how to choose can do anything more perfect.

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我对电影《后天》的看法

这是我第二次看《后天》这部电影。第一次，和很多人一样，我看到的是人类和自然的矛盾，环境问题，资源问题，觉得人类是多么的愚蠢，在灾难面前是多么的渺小。然后就想着怎样保护环境，节约能源，避免电影上的情况真的发生。

但是这次，我并没有从环境的角度去看这部电影，而是从人性的角度去看。我看到了，在灾难面前人们亲情、友情、爱情的体现，看到了人们在死亡面前的勇敢，对工作的认真和执着，还有一些人在科学面前的愚昧与无知。

这次，我深深地感受到了什么是责任，什么是坚持，什么是承诺。很多时候，我们没有必要为了那些所谓的原则去执着于某一种做事方式。在某些关键时刻，我们必须得放弃一些次要的东西，必须懂得取舍才可以把一件事做得更完美。

一篇英语短文

My favorite city Beijing Beijing is China's second largest city in terms of population, after Shanghai. It is a major transportation hub, with dozens of railways, roads and expressways entering and leaving it in all directions. It is also the focal point of many international flights to China. Beijing is recognized as the political, educational, and cultural center of the People's Republic of China, while Shanghai and Hong Kong predominate in economic fields. Beijing is one of the Four Great Ancient Capitals of China. It will also host the 2008 Summer Olympics. Names Beijing （åŒ—äº¬） literally means "Northern capital", in line with the common East Asian tradition whereby capital cities are explicitly named as such. Other cities similarly named include Nanjing （å—äº¬）， China, meaning "southern capital"; Tokyo （æ±äº¬）， Japan, and ÄÃ´ng Kinh （æ±äº¬； now Hanoi）, Vietnam, both meaning "eastern capital"; as well as Kyoto （äº¬éƒ½）， Japan, and Gyeongseong （äº¬åŸŽ； now Seoul）, Korea, both meaning simply "capital". Peking is the name of the city according to Chinese Postal Map Romanization, and the traditional customary name for Beijing in English. The term originated with French missionaries four hundred years ago and corresponds to an older pronunciation predating a subsequent sound change in Mandarin from to . ( is represented in pinyin as j, as in Beijing), and is still used in some languages (for example, the Portuguese name is Pequim). In China, the city has had many names. Between 1368 and 1405, and again from 1928 [4] and 1949, it was known as Peiping （åŒ—å¹³； Pinyin: Beiping; Wade-Giles: Pei-p'ing）, literally "Northern Peace". On both occasions, the name changed â€” with the removal of the element meaning "capital" (jing or king， äº¬) â€” to reflect the fact the national capital had changed to Nanjing, the first time under the Hongwu Emperor of the Ming Dynasty, and the second time with the Kuomintang (KMT) government of the Republic of China, so that Peking was no longer the capital of China. The Communist Party of China reverted the name to Beijing (Peking) in 1949 again in part to emphasize that Beijing had returned to its role as China's capital. The government of the Republic of China on Taiwan has never formally recognized the name change, and during the 1950s and 1960s it was common in Taiwan for Beijing to be called Beiping to imply the illegitimacy of the PRC. Today, almost all of Taiwan, including the ROC government, uses Beijing, although some maps of China from Taiwan still use the old name along with pre-1949 political boundaries. Yanjing （ç‡•äº¬； Pinyin: YÄnjÄ«ng; Wade-Giles: Yen-ching） is and has been another popular informal name for Beijing, a reference to the ancient State of Yan that existed here during the Zhou Dynasty. This name is reflected in the locally-brewed Yanjing Beer as well as Yenching University, an institution of higher learning that was merged into Peking University. During the Yuan Dynasty, Beijing was known as Khanbaliq which is the Cambuluc described in Marco Polo's accounts. There are many great Chinese cities, but for me the greatest city has to be Xi'an 西安， the city I came from. Xi'an is perhaps the greatest, and certainly one of the greatest ancient capitals of China. Thirteen dynasties made Xi'an their capital, including the three greatest dynasties in Chinese history: Zhou, Han and Tang. The city has a history of more than 3000 years, it was first constructed in the 12th century BC. Xi'an is also considered as one of the four greatest ancient capitals in the entire world. The ancient city of Chang An was to East Asia what Rome was to Europe. It is one of the only two ancient Chinese cities that was known in the classical western world. The ancient Greek name for Xi'an, or Chang An as it was then called, is Thyne Metropolis. For thousands of years Xi'an was at the eastern terminus of the great Silk Road, attracting visitors from India, Persia, Mesopotamia, Greece, Rome and beyond. During the Han Dynasty Chang An was one of the largest cities in the world, and during the Tang Dynasty, it became the world's largest and most prosperous city. Behind the huge city walls stretched a central avenue leading to the imperial palace that was laid with marble and one hundred and fifty metres wide. Although after the Tang Dynasty the city lost its former grandeur and prestige, it was still considered as one of the most important cities in China in subsequent dynasties up to the present day. I've written a "poem" 。

英语作文一次难忘的旅行

An Unforgettable Travel

My families plan to visit the interesting place p of Shanghai.We are led to the Oriental Pearl TV Tower ,a famous tourist attraction,which is on every Shanghainese's lips.It is a magnificent building located in Pudong New Area,it is the tallest building,so it's very easy to see this building,even if you are several miles away it.As we get to the high floor of the Oriental Pearl TV Tower,we see the attractive viwswhich includes the Huangpu River through the window.At the moment,l suddenly moved by the builders put their soul and energy to this building and let it be a landmark of this city.

This is the trip l never forget.

原创作品

急求一篇关于吸烟的英语对话

吸烟的

A:You believe that smoking helps people relax and think more effectively. you argue that many famous statesmen smoke heavliy and live healthliy into their eighties while some nonsmokers die young.

译文

A；你相信吸烟可以让人放松和更有效的思考。你也指出很多知名人士抽烟抽的很凶却可以悠然活到八十岁，而很多不抽烟者却死的很早。

B:You are persuade you partner to give up smoking ,saying that medical reseach has proved the destructive effect of smoking on human health .Besides,smoking is forbindden in public places in more and more countries

译文

B：你奉劝你的伙伴戒烟，因为医学研究已经证实抽烟对人体健康有摧毁性的影响。还有就是抽烟在很多公共场合都是被禁止的。