剑桥雅思7test1表格作文,希望高手予以批改,20分不多,但保证送出

The data indicates that consumer spending on different items from five different countries in 2002,including Ireland,Italy,Spain,Sweden,and Turkey.The first section consists of Food,Drinks,and Tobacco.Specially,Turkey is accounted in 32.14% and Turkey spends more money on Food,Drinks,Tocbacco than other countries.The statistics from Italy,Spain,and Sweden were similar in the first section.Accroding to the data,the second section is made up of Clothing and Footwear.9% from Italy is the highest percentage and the lowest percentage is Sweden.The third section is Leisure and Education.The percentage of Italy and Sweden are 3.20% and 3.22%.Turkey spends money on Leisure and Education is 4.35% which is the highest percentage in the third section.As the table shown,most people would like to spend more money on Food,Drinks,and Tobacco and spend less money on Leisure and Education.修改完毕！请LZ给分吧 ⊙﹏⊙。

剑桥7 Test1 Task One 帮忙改错,评分

From the table, it is not difficult to find that consumers in these countries tended to spend much less amount of money on clothing/footwear and leisure/education than on Food/Drinks/Tobacco.---->From the table, it is not difficult to find that consumers in these countries tended to spend much less money on clothing/footwear and leisure/education than on Food/Drinks/Tobacco.In particular, Turkey is the country with teh most money spending on Food/Drinks/Tobacco(about 32.14%).---->In particular, people in Turkey like to spend most on Food/Drinks/Tobacco(about 32.14%).主语是人spend，不是country spendin average for that catagory.----> in average in that catagory.For the money spent---->For the spending。

there is not very large differentiations ---->there is not huge differentiation基本不错。10分可以打6-7分。

不过，你能做到，只看你的文章，把图标大部分内容画出来吗？如果你画不出来，你就要想想，还差什么没有描述出来。 另外拼写错误，你在word里面自己改吧。

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剑桥7 test1 大作文,求大神改一改

One of the burning problems facing our society is whether some children are born with talent while others are not or any child can be taught to be good at something. Different opinions will be showed as follows.Some people support that talent (is) given randomly and it has nothing to do with the later education. Actually our character is designed by our gene to some extend (so) different people have unique advantage(and disadvantages) . But gene never speaks. If we want to know the secrete of ourselves, we need a special tool, which is now called education. Therefore later education is just a method to find out what children are really good at.Then other people hold a view that practice makes perfect. Sometimes hardworking can make up for your shortcomings and even help you become outstanding. And the purpose of education is to make people better trained and skilled.(However,) in my opinion both sides have convincing reasons. We are born with (strong points) and disadvantages and some will keep company with us for our whole life. But (it) doesn't mean we have no chance to change (them). In other words, we can make efforts to make up for what we are not satisfied and (strengthen) our advantages. I (think) great people (are those) with innate talent and continuous hardworking.All in all, the issue is still (arguable) and we can't figure out (which) is more resonable. Although we can't choose our talent, we can be serious about the later study and try our best to be more talented.。

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