为创新英语大赛复赛练的两篇作文,求高手修改,急！24号早上6点半

看你写你应该是初中生或者高中生低年级，你写的这篇绝对别用，别说没提醒你，用这篇你会死的很惨，翻译成中文后完全就是小学一二年级的水平，You can give some examples and facts to support your opinion.你里面没列子也没事实。

让你写成功和失败的话题不是让你东拉西扯，说成功怎样失败怎样，你上面这篇就是，根本没思路的，写英语作文首先要有中心思想，段首要有thesis statement，比如这篇文章你可以说失败让人成功，观点很简单，failure is the gateway to success接下来就开始分几方面阐述这个观点failure, of which most people are afraid, is commonly thought to be the wicked evil that anyone avid for success want to avoid. however, the opposite seems to be ture to me. it acts as the light which navigates me through all the obstacles and hardships on my way to success. without experiencing failure i dont even stand a chance of knowing where the success lies. as the saying goes failure is the mother of success. i hold a firm view that failure is the only way to success.firstly。

.secondly。

..thirdly。

.in conclusion。

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2013年全国创新英语作文大赛复赛自我介绍

自我介绍大家好，我叫。

，来自钦州，我很高兴能在这里与大家认识，我是纺织工业学校的一名学生，我的专业是针织，我很荣幸能参加集训营，我参加集训营是因为我喜欢英语，我希望在集训营里学到的用在我以后的工作中，并开始我的职业生涯。因为我坚信将在很多领域都需要英语。

我的英语很差这就是我为什么在这里和大家一起学习，我知道我拿下英语将是一个巨大的挑战，但我坚信，“宝剑锋从磨出，梅花香自苦寒来”，坚持就是胜利，希望就在今后的学习中请大家多多指教，谢谢！Self-introductionHello everyone! My is。

, from Qinzhou. I'm so glad to meet you, and I'm currently a student at Guangxi Textile Industrial School. my major is knitting. It's my pleasure to join the CHAMPION training camp, because I love English and I hope I can learn something in the training for my future work. As we all know English is very useful in every field.My English is limited that's why I'm here. I know it's a huge challenge for me to conquer English, but I believe that “No pains, no gains, success belongs to the persevering”, I hope I can learn more from you, Thank you!。

第八届全国创新英语大赛复赛作文题是什么意思

以下为第八届全国创新英语大赛复赛试题： 复赛试题Directions: Read the following paragraph and write a composition as stated at about 300 words in 60 minutes. Your composition will be graded according to clarity, accuracy and meaningfulness。

In accordance with CRI news, the spirit of Chinese volunteers, from responding to the May 12 earthquake to the 2008 Beijing Olympic Games, not only touched the Chinese people, but also generated worldwide attention. Official statistics show that china has accumulated about 8 billion hours of volunteer work from 380 million volunteers since 1993 and is going to have more and more volunteers, especially the youth。How do you understand volunteer work? In what way(s) is it important to promote the well-being of individuals, families, communities and the world at large? Your writing ought to contain three parts, your viewpoint, the supporting ideas, and the conclusion。

作文命题思路和评分细则： 该作文题目就我国近年来越来越受重视和各认同的志愿者工作，对考生的观察能力、思维能力和社会体验能力进行考察。通过该题目的写作，检查考生的语言逻辑组织能力和语言表达能力。

考生可以在所给题目范围内自己命题进行写作。