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    英语作文《i'm ready》

    I'm ready! As far as I'm concerned, everyone needs help and it's time to get ready to help others. I'm ready to give my helping hand to my desk-mate who is poor at math. First, I will teach him the methods of solving math problems and help him with problems that he can't work out. In addition, I will also encourage him whenever he loses his heart. As the saying goes, you share rose and get fun. I wish everyone could give out his helping hand. I'm ready to give out mine, are you ready? 精彩亮点分析:亮点一: 开头以高分词组“as far as I'm concerned” 引出个人观点,并巧用强调句及从句, 明确表达了自己准备好帮助他人的总论点。

    亮点二:中间段落运用first, in addition等连接词,将具体帮助他人的步骤较清晰地呈现。亮点三:结尾段落用谚语提升了帮助他人的立意。

    亮点四:结尾句用设问句给读者留下思考空间,且起到点题作用,为整篇文章画龙点睛。

    i am ready for作文急需

    l am ready for helping

    i went to my university yesterday for getting my certificates.i was hungry.so i was going to a restaurent ,someone touhes my hand..i looked back.that was an old lady..she said to me。she is new here..her husband will come to get her.also she don't know the language。she is speaking in english.she shows me her mobile ,no charge in it.the charge bar is blinking in it。。i got the problem。i asked her 。so do you want a phone? i think this is not the right question.do you need a phone ,is right?..she replied me yes..then i gave my phone to her ,she called her husband..told the correct place where she is waiting..afterthat she said to me thanks..i said its all right.she gave me money..but i didn't accept it。..finally i said you are always welcome。

    plz correct my notebook

    I'm ready for working

    I love to work for my class, because as a student, member of the class. To show that I am involving in the class activity, I'm ready for working . There are a lot of things that I can do for the class, like when the class room is dirty I can just take a broom and clear the class room. After clearing the classroom, I feel relished, as I do it, and the whole class benefit.

    I believe I'm ready.

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