雅思剑9作文范文

求雅思剑桥9的test1大作文范文的翻译

Childrens education has long been our concern since Plato once uttered, "Education is where a country should start at." However, it is still a controversial issue after all these years among people who are particularly concerned about it. Some people believe that it is parents responsibility to cultivate their kids to be fully aware of what a social being should look like; others, whereas, argue that schools should take over this for the ultimate goal. In this essay, I would put this issue in question and further analyse both sides before presenting my personal perspective.

On one hand, parents, as the first touchers of their kids, should tell them how to differentiate right from wrong. Given the time parents spend with their kids, they can be more likely to observe everyday change of their children. As a result of this, they are accountable for how their children normally behave in reality. More importantly, considering the fact that people according to their social being are usually placed into diverse norms, parents, as a family, as a part of community and as individuals in the society, should appropriately behave in action so as to deliver a message to their kids in which what should be respected and cherished in lives is highly highlighted.

On the other hand, academic institutions should take the responsibility for educating students to be entirely ready to enter the society. After leaving parents for schools, kids almost devote their most prime time at schools with their peels, their friends and their teachers; therefore, schools ought to put much emphasis on their growth as a person. Consequently, students could learn what they cannot acquire from home, such as communicative skills, understanding of various cultures etc.

剑桥雅思9里面的test4大作文,就是说现在很多语言在消失,有些人认

雅思作文任务完成度只占四分之一的成绩，而且一般而言你写啥观点都行，只要你能说通。所以正反都行，我习惯是写冷观点，和别人不一样，容易上分。不过具体看个人

我把我写作思路搬上来吧，你借鉴下

先说many people think this tendency will undermine the diversity of language seriously,yet I would state my objection to this issue after analyzing the following reasons.

第一段写the preservation of these rare language will waste plenty of funds which should be used in many other fields contributing to society.

然后写the disappearance of these language will remarkably benifit our daily communication.

第三段我喜欢先列反方观点然后反驳，some people may say the diversity of language is a sigificant part of our culture,however,the importance of it is especially exaggerated.

雅思写作主要还是语法单词架构，观点不能说不重要，但不必看的太重，真想不出来可以用网上的万能观点，联系经济社会教育等常见话题展开

顾家北手把手教你雅思写作（剑9版）

顾家北老师的写作书和写作课对雅思写作的能力和分数提升是很有帮助的，我们就亲切的叫他北北吧。

北北这本手把手出版已经好几年了，这次针对剑九修改并再版，依旧值得烤鸭们学习。北北这本手把手尤其适合语法薄弱的，和想脱离模版的烤鸭们。

同样也适合入门级考生，里面以问答的方式解答了关于雅思作文的各种各样的问题，以改错的形式讲语法，讲范文的方式更是特别，个人觉得很有帮助，这书写得很用心，能够看得出北北是从学渣的角度去分析研究怎么样才能让学渣有实力通过雅思写作。这本书很适合烤鸭们，尤其是对新烤鸭。

里面的内容很容易看懂，而且修改的错误都是中国学生最容易犯得基础错误，好好利用非常的有收获，书里面详细解释了大家常见的语法错误，有很多范例，适合语法不好的同学来纠正句子。另外还有一些常见作文的经典观点，也很实用。

这本书的另一个特点是对于自学的考生很有用，书里直接给读者列好了一个学习计划，基本上可以一天两篇练习，不但可以自己动手练笔，还能照着范例进行修改。书里还有很多语法俗称，对于语法都忘光了烤鸭来说，这样也能速补一下，达到临阵磨枪的效果。

就目前市场上流行的雅思作文辅导书来看，这本算最好的三本之一了，内容很丰富而且全面。

帮忙修改雅思小作文,顺便请指点指点

我想说，楼上的评论不准确。

你的字数192，没超200就不算多，雅思考官的范文也有到这个字数的。其次，你的观点很有见地，而且表达很准确。

所以保守估计至少有7分。有小的语法错误，但不影响表达。

比如第一段， in the next 20 years，这句话有点冗长，建议拆两句，比较推荐用英式拼写（虽然无所谓，但考官都是英国的，他们看着别扭）你第三段next开头用的没有问题还有，非限制性定语从句用的有点多，就是你那个which，换个句型哈。注意一下你标点的使用，漏了几个逗号。

我很喜欢你的语言风格，很像考官的范文。还是在大作文上多下点功夫吧看好你，加油。

问题补充里的话为什么用现在完成时雅思剑九T4的小作文求解谢谢-百

现在完成时除了有表示过去的动作一直延续到现在甚至会继续下去的意思外，它还可以用来表示过去的动作对现在造成的影响，举个栗子，比如说 The plane has arrived . 飞机已经来了。

（说明现在的情况：飞机在这儿）原文中Nuclear has risen by 3q, and solar/wind by 2. 表示增长的程度。 After slight increase, hydropower has fallen back to the 1980 figure表示它已经降回，表明一个状态。

问题补充里的话为什么用现在完成时雅思剑九T4的小作文In1980,

现在完成时除了有表示过去的动作一直延续到现在甚至会继续下去的意思外，它还可以用来表示过去的动作对现在造成的影响，举个栗子，比如说 The plane has arrived . 飞机已经来了.（说明现在的情况：飞机在这儿）原文中Nuclear has risen by 3q, and solar/wind by 2. 表示增长的程度. After slight increase, hydropower has fallen back to the 1980 figure表示它已经降回，表明一个状态.。