假如你是高中生李华,你校计划派1批交换生去美国学习1年,写申请书

Dear Sir/Madam,My name is Li Hua and is currently very interested to apply to be an exchange student at your college, to study for one year. Currently, I am study at the Beijing Academic High school and is achieving very well in both my studies and competitions. I have represented my school in numerous school sports teams and participated in different volunteering programs such as fundraise for the earthquakes. I am highly motivated and wish to further improve my English at your College, as it will provide me with a very good opportunity and English environment. As the teachings and students both speak english. I greatly appreaciate this chance and understand that this chance will have many benefits for me. Even though the cost will be quite high.I hope to hear from you soon. Please consider me as the right applicant as I will be adding value to your college. Thank you for your time.Yours SincerelyLi Hua。

项目学习的英文描述-英文自我介绍我要参加一个去美国的交换生项目

I am XXX。

Few days later, Ill go to America to study。 My farther has a friend in America。

When i live in America she will look after me and Ill live in hers home。 In the America i can have many chances to communicate with others which can have my english be better。

I study in America in order to exchange and be an english teacher in the future。 about my parents,they are very pleased for i have the chance to study 。

In my senior high school,i have many friends they treat me good and also my schoolmaster。 Every weekends,I play basketball with my sworn followers , dance or play piana。

about last month in my senior school i received an award on maths。 写的太烦了假如下次有时间再继续吧。

交换生出国英文申请,求高人修改！！看看是否有语法错之类的

我不知道你申请交换生是和谁竞争，是本校的固定的名额，主要看你们的作品，定了之后交一份申请走走程序还是要和其他学校甚至其他国家的学生竞争这几个名额，如果是前者，内容算是符合要求。

如果是后者，那么这篇东西对申请起着非常重要的作用，因为我估计交换生一般没有面试，所以这是唯一一次你向国外学校展示你自己的优势的机会。可是抛开语法不说，内容上我觉得不够充实，没有足够的展现出你是多么热爱你的所学，你可以做到比周围的人都优秀。

当然，我完全可以理解，你所学的专业估计没有在英文写作方面有很多的训练。可是内容上建议你能加上一些具体点的例子，以及你更加真实的感受，减少一些比较笼统的说法。

强烈建议你加上这些内容之后去找英文老师再次修改，因为所实话，the structure of your personal statement really needs to be rearranged and some of sentences are not logial enough。Also you include some information that the foreign university is not really care, for example, in the beginning you said:"I am a girl born in a small city. The year I was 18, I left my hometown and came to a big city where I am going to study and spent my five-year campus life there. I have learnt to do everything by myself and enjoy good relationship with classmates in the college, which I used to be so much worried about. " Here, I guess you want to show that you improve your life through your own effort. But frankly speaking this is not supposed to be in your statement for exchange because all the students did the same thing. They are all changing their life by themselves and that is what you should do as a college student. Therefore you d better really show "who you are", what is the special thing of "you"。

Maybe you need to think and then give an example that why you are a special student deserve this exchange opportunity.我特想给你改改结构的问题可是因为我不知道你的内容能不能动，所以实在难以下手。强烈建议，好好想想内容和结构有哪些可以改进的，然后再找个英文老师改改语法。

在此大改给你改下明显的语法错误：I am a girl born in a small city. When I was 18, I left my hometown and came to a big city for college life. I have learnt to do everything by myself and enjoyed a good relationship with classmates in the college, which I used to be worried about. After being more confident and independent, I really look forward to enjoy a campus life in America. Theres no doubt that Ill learn much more from the friendly people and culture there where is neither in my hometown nor my country.（这句是想说美国人民和美国文化很友好，中国人和中国文化却不友好吗？孩子，你想夸人家我理解，不能够这样贬低自己的国家和人民啊！！！！我希望这不是你的本意，但如果是，那么我不得不说，如果你不是该领域顶尖的人才，对自己国家的背叛会在国外被人瞧不起，会直接导致你被拒！！） I major in Urban Planning in my university, which used to be my dream when I was young. I tried my best to learn more about it, and did pretty well in architecture（请举例）. In addition, I really go for in art designing and painting（没理解）. The interests and hard-working enabled me to get the first price in a designing competition. When I know that my dreaming subject, Landscape Architecture is just available in UC Davis, I am so happy and decide to apply for exchange.Urban Planning is a subject requires various knowledge, science and art, internal and external. And if I get the chance to go abroad, it means I get the chance to know more（多余的话啊）. Its certain that the rich experience will help a girl get closer to her goal, which is to be a qualified expert in Urban Planning. In the near future, I plan to put my knowledge into practice（太笼统）. I leant from teachers and books how other countries carry out their city development, but I never really know what it is like. Hence, during the time I will spend abroad, I want to complete a cognitive map of UC Davis and have a study of image space on small scale.哎，看你的问题的时候觉得你很不错，我喜欢帮助有梦想又愿意努力的人。这就是为什么我花快1小时给你敲这些东西。

但是看到你中间那句话，实在伤心，希望你本意不是那样。

。否则太令人失望了 Yx i Sverige 恩，楼上的答案很值得学习，比我有耐心多了，赞！。

向外国交换生说来自己家的好处的英语作文

J1国际交换生，中美交换生项目是非营利性政府项目，为年龄在15至18周岁之间的中学生而设。本项目可使中国中学生持访问学者签证（J-1）顺利到达美国，居住在美国家庭里，并在美国中学就读一学年。期间，中国学生不仅可以切身感受并适应美国的校园文化及社会生活的方方面面，培养独立生活和社会交往的能力，而且由于与美国家庭共同生活，可以迅速提高英语水平，建立完全可以信赖的人脉关系，更具有价值的是，可以寻找并打通留学美国大学本科的渠道，进而通过双方接触，为一年后留学美国奠定坚实的基础。

美国国际交换生可谓优势众多，把眼光放长远上看来，参加交换生项目最佳的年龄段：15~16周岁，即现在的国内所处年级是初三、或者高一。主要根据以下几点关于申请年级的分析：

第一种，学生初三毕业，申请一年的交换生，去美国公立高中学习就读10年级。持有J-1签证，注意该签证不属于一年多次往返的签证类型，一般是当年的8月底赴美，次年的6月中旬回国。次年1月份根据学生在美国的适应情况，酌情决定是否继续在美国读书，完成高中学业。如果很喜欢美国的生活和学习方法，决定继续在美国求学，则需要同时准备相关的语言考试，比如SLEP,TOE-FL,SSAT等，并且于次年2月1号之前完成私立高中的申请。准备的越早，以后的选择就越多。如果不习惯还可以回国继续从高一开始重读高中。比较灵活。

想要一封申请国外大学的英语申请信

留学申请信和奖学金申请信中须写明下列几点：（1）写明申请学校和所学专业。

（2）提供申请人的个人资历。（3）索取申请学校相关的申请表等。

一、留学申请信（Application for Admittance） 经典范文之一 Dear Sir, I am going to graduate from Department of Computer in Huabei University in June next year.I am very eager to enter the Graduate School of your university next fall to study applied computer for Ph.D.degree. I would appreciate it very much if you would send me a graduate catalog of your university and any other necessary information,and also a set of application forms for admission.Thank you for your kind assistance. Sincerely yours, Wang Feng 经典范文之二 Dear Sir, I am writing in the hope that I may obtain an opportunity to further my study in Applied Physics toward Master degree in your university. My name is Li Jin,an undergraduate student of the Department of Applied Physics,Huabei University.Next year in the summer,I will graduate and get my B.S.degree.I plan to continue my study and research in this field.I chose Boston University because there are a congenial team of researchers,an array of databases and research projects in your school of Physics.I believe my interests are extremely congruent with the strengths of the school.And my solid academic background will meet your general entrance requirements for graduate study. I will appreciate it very much if you could send me the Graduate Application Forms,the Application Form for Scholarships/Assistantships,and other relevant information.My mailing address is shown on the top of this letter. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. Sincerely yours, Li Ming 二、奖学金申请信（Applications for Scholarships） 经典范文之一 Dear Sir: I should like to apply for one of the scholarships that your department may be offering to students from other countries.Would you please send me the necessary application froms and any further details about the scholarships. I am a postgraduate student in Beijing Science and Engineering University.I major in microelectronics engineering, and do some research work during my study years.I hope to have a further study and continue to do my research work if I succeed in obtaining the engineering scholarship. Enclosed please find two letters of recommendation and my score report card.Thank you for your consideration.I look forward to your reply. Respectfully yours, Ma Minghao 经典范文之二 Dear Dr. Gomes: I have read the announcement of the scholarship in chemistry that the University of Colorado is offering,and I would like to submit my application. The enclosed application form for admission to the graduate school of your university will give my educational history. However,I would like to point out that I have just received an M.S. Sincerely yours, Li Ming 经典范文之三 Dear Sir: I am writing to you in the hope of obtaining the scholarship in history to support my study and some research work. I am a graduate student in the Department of History in the Northeast University for Nationalities.In addition to study and research work,I also write books.Recently I have finished a book on the history of the Oroqen nationality in China,which is to be published by the World Book Publishing House in the coming year.I would like to focus on that field for my advanced studies. Enclosed please find three letters of recommendation and my resume.Thank you for your time and consideration.I look forward to your reply. Respectfully yours, Li Ming 这是模板，你自己改一下吧！。

志愿者帮助外国交换生适应新环境英语作文

I think we should do the followings: First, its best to ride a bike to school, dont take a bus or a taxi. Second, I will remember to turn off the lights when I leave the classroom. Third, in my free time, I will collect the empty bottles and waste paper for recycling. The fourth idea is turning off the shower when I m not using it. Fifth, it is imporment to save water and money. Also, I wont spend too much money on expensive things. Last, we had better not cut down the trees, we have to take care of the trees . Ill try my best to save the energy, I hope I can do something for our country.。