考研作文模板范文

2017考研英语作文模板网络内容为

Part B Directions: In your essay, you should 1) describe the drawing briefly, 2) explain its intended meaning, and then 3) give your comments。

You should write neatly on ANSHWER SHEET 2。 (20 points) 范文： Vividly depicted in the cartoon is a race of humans on a social network that are isolated in their own little cubicles。

They are all sitting in front of their computers, connected to each other through the Internet and their devoted looks and postures showed their addiction to the Internet。 This cartoon, I believe, intends to draw our attentions to the negative effects the Internet has brought to our daily life as it brings in some benefits, such as easy access to information, instant communication with people from afar and cheap cost of communication。

The more people are hooked to the Net, the more isolated they are from the real world。 Since people can easily pretend their identities on the Internet, everything online becomes illusive and untrustworthy。

The Internet, which was intended to bring people closer to each other, in effect prevents people from making real acquaintances that one can make with a casual exchange of greetings and eye-contact in a face-to-face communication。 Serious consequences, such as fear of real-time interactions, online cheating or blackmailing, may follow if the use of the Internet is not brought under systematic control。

I strongly suggest that people only use the Internet for necessary business transactions and personal contacts with those they have already known face to face。。

谁能介绍下考研英语看图作文范例并点评呢

看图作文在英语作文中是大家普遍缺乏练习的一种类型，一个提高的方式就是看范例和点评，针对其中的错误进行自我修正。

考学生or烤家长：写作原文 In the given picture, there are many parents standing at the gate of (outside)the examination room。 As we see, they are so worried that the sweat began (begin)to pour down their face。

In china, it is common knowledge that the exam decides (may determine)the future of children。 Hence, it reflects the problem that the （加上current Chinese表意更完整）educational system is unreasonable。

In fact, the problem has existed for several years。 Especially in china, the examination score decides the childrens development in the future。

（语法正确，但句意不合理。改为the examination score may influence childrens future development。

）In a sense, the examination seems to be the only standard that chooses the talents(can be used to select talents)。 Furthermore, it is so terrible educational system (the educational system is so terrible)。

I think we must take some effective measures to solve this problem。 In my opinion, we should adopt the following measures。

On the one hand, we should reform the educational institution and establish a more flexible approach to choose the talent (select talents)。 On the other hand, parents should give up the idea that the exam is the only key to judge (measure)childrens ability。

总体点评本文立意正确，内容切题，结构完整，需注意以下问题：1、文章的立意虽然正确，且深入切题，但文章的内容不够丰富充实，原因分析不够深刻。第二段在分析造成现象的时候提出了三点“考试决定孩子的未来”“考试是选拔人才的唯一标准”“教育制度很差”——“考试为什么会决定孩子的未来，它怎样决定了孩子的未来？”“为什么是选拔人才的唯一标准？（在现有的实情方面，因为其他方法难以实施和操作）”“教育制度很差，体现在什么方面？”2、文章内容的衔接逻辑不是很清楚，如第二段先说“考试决定未来”后说“考试是选拔人才的唯一标准”，而实际上“正因为在目前考试是选拔人才的唯一标准，所以考试在某种意义上决定了孩子的未来”。

3、文章依然存有少许汉式思维的句子，有的词组搭配不合理，应在此方面加强。多模仿一些经典佳句。

因此，建议作者以后在写作之中不要提笔就写，先列出一个大纲，把自己的思路理顺，使自己的文章逻辑清晰，通顺流畅。参考分数（满分20分）：12 英语写作水平的提升需要不断地练习，在改正错误中不断取得进步，不怕犯错误，怕明知道犯错误却不面对。

看了范文和点评，希望大家有思考，有提高。