求高手点评雅思“小作文”（剑7 Test2 Task1 ）

感觉还不错啊~

词语和句式较为多变，介词用得也准确，数据抓取得也合理。

表达年份时，可以有多种方式，除了直接写年份的数字，也可以说the year of 2004,the 2004 year等；

表示“从图中看出”这个意思，还可以用

from the graph,we can see。

xxx is shown(illustated, outlined。)from the table

it could be easily seen that 。

多背几个，等你一想表达这个意思时，可以随时调用。

总结段一般还是必要的，加上会显得比较完整。

写小作文可以写得很精彩，但是主要还是能把图描述准确，不要每句看起来都是一种结构，总之多背些句式是好的，到最后写起来会得心应手。

请专业人士帮忙改一篇雅思小作文,剑6test1task1,谢谢

我提几点意见

1：第2段第1行.首先有个用词不准. usage应该改为use（后面同理）， 因为usage是"用法"的意思， use同样可以做名词. usage有the generally accepted way of using something的意思， 而use才是the act of using. 另外这一句考虑重写一下， 因为目前句子主干是the use are three ways. 这个表述不恰当（重点考虑改写谓语）. 最后， 个人觉得ways后面的which应该加逗号， 因为我觉得你在写一个非限定性定语从句.

2：第2段倒数第2行. a SHAPE increase? or sharp?

3：第2段最后一行， reach应改为reaching. 和peaking并列的， 或者说补充的成分吧.

4：第3段"As can be seen from the table that the comparison of water consumption between Brazil and Congo from 3 factors。.." 此句缺乏谓语. table后面的that是对table的从句补充吧， 而句首as又是连词， 所以这句只出现了as引出的省略句， 并且缺乏谓语.

很晚了 有点困， 只能看出这么多了 - -b 我有不对的地方请指教. 希望这些能对你有用.

good luck,

剑6 TEST2 听力 大小写问题

我刚刚才做了那套听力，和楼主差不多的情况。

我想说的是：首先，现在大小写问题判得已经不像原来那么严格了，只要不是什么专有名词啥的该严格大写的情况没有大写，其它时候问题都不大。其次，具体到你上面说的情况，我觉得参照一下听力文本分析比较好。

1.education department 文本上没有大写，并且上下文没有暗示需要大写，此处我认为小写为好；2.Castles 这个应该是要大些的，听力文本上很清楚，大写肯定没错3.sec1的6-10的那个表格题由于有一个Nothing special在哪，所以个人觉得答案首字母大写没问题4.Review看本文吧，大写了的，你大写肯定没有。这期答案不知道是怎么回事。

谁有雅思剑桥6 Test 2 阅读的答案

楼主的工作让人崩溃。

追加啊！累死我的眼睛了，一个一个敲上来的，一定追加分啊！Passage11.i 2.i 3.iv 4.i 5.iii 6.FALSE 7.TRUE 8.NOT GIVEN 9.FALSE 10.TRUE 11.F 12.D 13.CPassage214~26:B I F M J N K G A G E H CPassage327~31:B E A C G 32.TRUE 33.FALSE 34.TRUE 35.FALSE 36.NOT GIVEN 37.TRUE 38.FALSE 39.TRUE 40.TRUE。

剑桥雅思6test2 小作文,高手来估分,谢谢

"per person per year" can be used in speaking but not academic writing.

You should not use "we" in academic writing as well.

"the chart describe us" is a translation of Chinese which has a grammar mistake. It should be "the chart tells us" but unfortunately, not in academic writing again. U may use "the chart shows that the trend of travelling more often than before。

What do u mean "As the car saw a dramatic growth"? I guess its another grammar mistake.

"In sum" should be "in conculsion" or "In summary".

Generally speaking, your essay is not bad but it should not be scored over 6. One of the reason is that you just list all the figures rather than comparing them. For example, it would be much better if you said "Taxi is more popular because its recent figure is more than 3 times than the previous one."

The other reason is you didnt point out the trend that people prefer to go further. Thats why the usage of car, long distance bus and taxi increases but walking and bicycle drops.

I suggest that you should spend 2-3 mimutes to analyse and find out the relationship between the figures first. Then you can start writing.

Practicing more helps you to improve your writing skill. Good luck and fighting!